Asa Mitaka manga animation by me, what could I add to improve this scene?

I already plan to improve the head animation, text and camera moves, so besides that. ty in advance for the help :)

u/emachita — 2 months ago
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[csm chp170 spoiler] I want to post some of the edits/manga animations I’ve made so far and the ones I’ll make in the future. Hope you guys like them :D

u/emachita — 11 days ago