is somebody gonna read fanfic(tomtord) like that? i wrote a timeline of some sort, but i have no idea if this gonna work, since im not gonna write if nobody gonna read it (I NEED OPINION ON THIS, ITS STILL W.I.P.) potential spoilers...?
TOMTORD fanfic with a little bit of tordedd
overall timeline (IT'S AU WHERE TORD NEVER BECAME RED LEADER/employed nor did he even gaf about military stuff) (its kinda dark/edgy so read if you want to)
the time when the action takes place is the period when Tord is very close to moving outl, he already befriends paul whom he knows through edd (paul and edd are friends)
-tord already stopped getting along with matt and tom
–he spends more and more time with Paul, going for walks with him etc
–the final fight with him and tom leads to the decision
–eventually he moves out, moves into pauls house, who lives with Patryck — his roommate.
–tord meets patryck
–everything is fine, but Tord misses Edd (insert mitski me and my husband song) and starts visiting him every few days
(in the background of it all, the paulpatryck bromance is happening)
–tord finally stopped visiting edd after he and tom had another fight, and edd had enough and told him to get the fuck out of his house (little argument)
*–*He returns to the house and starts arguing with patryck (it's well after midnight and paul has already fallen asleep), Tord gets very emotional and starts fight with patryck(-> after which Patrick doesn't speak to him anymore, and Tord isn't willing to apologize or explain why he blew up like that (not that Patryck even asked about it))
–tord is stumbling around in his p0rn addiction, he barely contacts Edd anymore.
(he told himself that if Edd doesn’t want him, then he doesn’t want edd either — he’s lying to himself)
*–*tord is kinda fucked up in his head being a big mess, (he told himself that a new start with paul and patryck is gonna be better for him)
–theres a scene where tord comes to home, sees paul watching tv and patryck layin(trying to fall asleep) on pauls lap, (patryck had fever, and paul was trying to comfort him in some way) and it broke tord completely.
– now hes just living with them, talking with paul if he needs to, sometimes not at all
–tord had (...) thought that he doesn’t fit anywhere (since edd has tom and matt, and paul has patryck)
(in the background of these, theres also patryck thats jealous of tords relationship with paul for some reason, and hes mean to tord (AND PAULPATRYCK RELATIONSHIP IS KINDA FALLING BECAUSE OF TORD))
–bonding between tord and paul, paul wanted to take tord to walk down the beach
–later at that night, tord and patryck were arguing, because of what? paul, tord is jealous of patryck and patrick is jealous of tord, (tord is less jealous, hes more like just trying to shield himself)
–the arguing is over, after like two hours tord is in his ‘room’,(censor), interrupted by paul arguing with patryck, (more like with a wall since patryck is not responding at all), tord comes out to see whats happening, and boom he sees paul and patryck in kitchen, paul stopped yelling at patryck after some minutes tho, paul is just dressing the wounds on his hip by sticking plasters and sum shit, this time tord finally realizes that patryck has some (...), and he couldnt fucking belive it (derealization moment of tord,(...))
–tord simply says hi paul, grabs his cigarettes and goes outside
– Tord is at his lowest point when he goes outside to smoke in front of the block and meets tom. Tom is shitfaced and was heading to another bar (they just threw him out of the previous one). (yueah, paulpatryck and tord live in the same estate where they have a bar, and the road from bar A to bar B goes past the flats complex where tord lives.)
tord starts bothering tom. tom doesn’t really make a big scene, they talk about edd and why he exploded earlier. tom is pretty drunk so he only half-knows what he’s saying and doesn’t remember the other half.
tord and tom head to that bar on the estate. tord said “fuck it” and decided to go drinking with tom.
–they go to the bar. happens to be a billiard table right there(since tord isnt really a person who goes to bars). tom and tord get wasted, play some pool, laugh their asses off and overall have a really good time together.
–after that they went behind the bar to fight for fun/hobby. a few people gathered to watch them fight. after their fight tom tried to flirt with someone and it went like this:
|“hey (blablablablabla)”
|“oh sorry i’m a lesbian” ← thats a joke, laugh please (i wrote it so i wont forget the joke)
|“i thought you were a man”
and that’s when tord finds out that tom isn’t straight at all (i thought you were straight? “yeah, straight from hell” type of joke)
–a bit more tomtord talk later, tom walks him home (well, more like goes with tord because tord’s house is on the way).
–reality greets tord. poor guy wakes up with a massive hangover (it’s been a long time since he got that fucking drunk).
he has a small argument with paul. paul didn’t know where tord was the whole night and at first was kinda worried
i dont know if i should continue writing this, its gonna be more like a slice of life with some edgy stuff, (the edgy stuff is gonna end in half of this all i swear)
i need opinion on this, if i should write it or not, the "(...)" is when i really cant say the stuff on this sub, so i just delete it from this text for it be less edgy
this whole thing is just au that i made up btw, i made it in a timeline now, so i can avoid writing stuff in chapters that im gonna regret later, or thinking "yeah i could made it better"
