Desperate for tips

What should I change about this part? What kind of bg should I make (if necessary)? Id also appreciate your feedback and criticism.

Ignore second part

u/isHani9 — 2 days ago
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مرات تشوف منشورات تمنعك من حذف الفيس

Someone's fantasy btw

u/isHani9 — 3 days ago