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u/maxkennedy02

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First 10 pages of my screenplay (need feedback)

I wrote this for school and it’s part of a feature. I’ve never asked for advice before but any feedback will be useful. I’m not very good at describing my own stuff so I’ll just say it’s a crime romance and leave it at that, if that’s useful, idk. Thanks

u/maxkennedy02 — 4 days ago