Hey y'all, new here, I wrote this lyrics the other day and I'd like to know what you think about it. Please be nice

I feel so small, invisible

I wish i felt, invincible

Perseverance is non existent

I wish I was more resilient

I look at you, I see the world

You voice got me in a chokehold

I try to scream, to be bold

But my strength was already sold

Then I just close my eyes, I inhale

I burst into tears, I exhale

Holding my heart, my breaking heart

Please tell me how to have a new start

So open my lungs and exhale your breath in me

Show me the stars that sit in your eyes

Levitate me above the clouds

And show me the voice for which I bowed

Never knew how to be strong

Never knew how to impose my voice

Below everything, I just here and watch

As my universe caves in

I tried to be strong (I did)

I tried to impose my voice (I did)

Under your command, I try to stand

But I always fall on my knees

Then I just close my eyes, I inhale

I burst into tears, I exhale

Holding my heart, my breaking heart

Please tell me how to have a new start

So open my lungs and exhale your breath in me

Show me the stars that sit in your eyes

Levitate me above the clouds

And show me the voice for which I bowed

I feel so small...

I feel so little...

I feel so small...

An unsolved riddle

Grab me by the chin, lift my face to the sky

Kiss me on the forehead, say that I will be fine

Tell me a great story, fill me with your glory

Help me draw a real line

Grab me by the chin, lift my face to the sky

Kiss me on the forehead, say that I will be fine

Tell me a great story, fill me with your glory

Help me draw a real line

Then I just close my eyes, I inhale

I burst into tears, I exhale

Holding my heart, my breaking heart

Please tell me how to have a new start

So open my lungs and exhale your breath in me

Show me the stars that sit in your eyes

Levitate me above the clouds

And show me the voice for which I bowed

Then I just close my eyes, I inhale

I burst into tears, I exhale

Holding my heart, my breaking heart

Please tell me how to have a new start

So open my lungs and exhale your breath in me

Show me the stars that sit in your eyes

Levitate me above the clouds

And show me the voice for which I bowed

After everything, I just sit here

In need of help to escape this hell

Laying down, sobbing and holding myself

And I wait for your salvation

But it will never come

Will it ever come?

It will never come

Never come....

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u/moigana — 21 days ago

Indigo VNL goes actually kinda hard

I've never been a huge fan of VNLs, but I wanted to try the new design and it is not that bad as I expected

u/moigana — 3 months ago