Looking for feedback, Producer is Sapier

(Hook)
Isolè to ease my pain, 988 fuck that call a friend
They hurt that kid his life’s they debt
It’s me vs the world I can’t count on them
No sleep all day, I’m somnolent
You care bout me please promise it
I Clench regret I hate this shit

(Verse 1)
They made me break, so I built back up
You touch my wings it’ll have an effect
we all the same I call it ripple project
We all lil’ waves and we all the same
say be like them, I say be insane
Put one finger up, I’ll be number two
You got me, plus god, now look at you
Whizzed right past just taking in the bright view
It’s a trip on the road, go home to the void
Panic leg shakes playing with my BPM
Pre cordial pain stay sharp in my chest
Do you lack sleep too? let’s call all night
Don’t fear no judge let’s dig into the mud
didn’t find no love I found a diamond in the rough
think if I pray I could save a couple lives
But I have to be perfect god I need some advice

(Hook)
Isolè to ease my pain, 988 fuck that call a friend
They hurt that kid his life’s they debt
It’s me vs the world I can’t count on them
No sleep all day, I’m somnolent
You care bout me please promise it
I Clench regret I hate this shit

(Verse 2)
You miss me much, you don’t leave no calls
Lucid state dream like all day long
Bright dark eyes damn your opulent
She locked her heart then I opened it
(sing) Hate my self lord yeah I fucked it up
(sing) no we not like them but we coming up
(sing) don’t take no shame just take the funds
Schoolboy Q I’m gon break this bank
don’t like fake daps please keep some space
Like a hunnid’ kilometers from my last known place
Don’t trust yourself now you all secluded
I miss myself I’m so diluted
You see that dude? they all mis-used him
All he wanna do is make improvements

u/probablymanic333 — 4 days ago