
App Store screenshots I made for my first iOS launch — looking for honest craft feedback before I update the listing
Made these for my first iOS launch two weeks back.
First time doing App Store screenshots and I'm planning to redo the listing in the next update. Looking for honest craft feedback before I commit.
What I tried to do:
- 8 screens that each lead with the value, not the feature
- Hand-drawn elements (washi tape, doodles, weather stamps) for warmth
- Pastel theme background to give the listing a unified look in a category that mostly defaults to dark UI screenshots
What I'm not sure about:
- Headlines feel a touch precious in places — am I overdoing the "the good days find you again" voice?
- 8 screens vs the usual 5 — too many?
- The handwritten/scrapbook aesthetic vs cleaner editorial — too niche for the general App Store audience?
Open to anything. Tear it apart.
https://apps.apple.com/us/app/reflect-ai-journal-diary/id6762427801