Hey all,
So I have been cold emailing producers and I got a response back. I sent them over my pilot script and they seem extremely interested. Wanted to ask the question in the title and your thoughts on it?
Any advice would be most appreciated
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Title: We Are Love Tax
Genre: Comedy
Format: TV Pilot
Page Length: 28
Logline: "A documentary film crew follow an amateur band from Swansea as they blend their daily lives with the dream of making it big."
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1X7mmLTGTb1-oIAGemh0Kj4BesLgFA0pR/view?usp=sharing
Specific concerns: Looking for any feedback. I think the jokes are solid but obviously comedy is subjective so I'm always looking for new eyes on it. Big bit I am mixed on is the ending sequence at the talent show; I think it is funny but it could be funnier, so any feedback on that specifically would be wonderful.
Title: We Are Love Tax
Genre: Comedy
Format: TV Pilot
Page Length: 28
Logline: "A documentary film crew follow an amateur band from Swansea as they blend their daily lives with the dream of making it big."
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1X7mmLTGTb1-oIAGemh0Kj4BesLgFA0pR/view?usp=sharing
Specific concerns: Looking for any feedback. I think the jokes are solid but obviously comedy is subjective so I'm always looking for new eyes on it. Big bit I am mixed on is the ending sequence at the talent show; I think it is funny but it could be funnier, so any feedback on that specifically would be wonderful.
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1X7mmLTGTb1-oIAGemh0Kj4BesLgFA0pR/view?usp=sharing
Logline: "A documentary film crew follow an amateur band from Swansea as they blend their daily lives with the dream of making it big."
Looking for any feedback. I think the jokes are solid but obviously comedy is subjective so I'm always looking for new eyes on it. Big bit I am mixed on is the ending sequence at the talent show; I think it is funny but it could be funnier, so any feedback on that specifically would be wonderful.
Hope you enjoy :)