u/supersmall69

r/FanFiction r/writingfeedback r/invinciblegtg r/DokkanBattleCommunity r/pokemonfanfiction

Need feedback on my story! Please let me know what you think of it, any and all feedback is welcome! UNSHEATHE: PROLOGUE + Chapter 1

Hey guys! I am currently looking for feedback on this story I am writing. It's been quite a journey coming up with the story bones, character names, themes, ideas, etc. (nobody tells you how much planning actually goes into this stuff lol). And yes, everything is OC, from the character names to characters themselves to the region, gym concept, etc. Just my own personal take. I have finally published the prologue and Chapter 1. It is quite introductory but I would love some feedback nonetheless. Writing style, improvements, whatever you can provide. Thank you!

https://www.wattpad.com/1645725173-unsheathe-prologue-marie-1

https://www.wattpad.com/1645773521-unsheathe-chapter-1-marie-2

u/supersmall69 — 6 hours ago

▲ 57 r/invinciblegtg

u/LincGames waiting to comment under posts asking for teambuilding and GDA Ops help.

u/supersmall69 — 6 days ago

▲ 2 r/DokkanBattleCommunity

For those struggling with the Movie Bosses mission, Dabura is genuinely one of the best units in the game. 2 Whis with Garlic Jr's revive and you're good to go.

u/supersmall69 — 21 days ago

▲ 3 r/invinciblegtg

If I'm building Blark and Omniman, are other (Eves, Yellomark, Agent Spider, Red Rush, Tech Jacket) food until I start building them? Or should I save them for future purposes?

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u/supersmall69 — 1 month ago

▲ 1 r/invinciblegtg

Based on my characters, what is my best team? What units can I use as food? I also have Tech Jacket.

u/supersmall69 — 2 months ago

▲ 5 r/invinciblegtg

New player here, is it stupid to consider getting the units instead of the gems and recruitment cards? Feel like there's more immediate benefit by getting the heroes for ranking up heroes.

u/supersmall69 — 2 months ago