u/theREALcolton1

Took the matrix out of first then put True Stories (1986) at 4.

As a fun thing to do for my time, I want to write and direct my own short film for the 80TH annual CANNES film festival. I’m screenwriting and I started this not really with a specific direction to go, but I’m really coming here because I feel like I’m at a dead end. Reading it back, I like my tone, but it just feels empty as a short film. Keep in mind I’m saying this about what is- maybe three paragraphs?

Here’s the link. I think it should work. Let me know if it does: https://www.writerduet.com/script/#013WJ\\\~\\\*\\\*\\\*\\\~branch=-