r/ongezellig

A while back I made an Ongezellig 4 Season Series + Movie, and I recently made an Ongezellig 13 EP Series.

As some of you know, the 4 Season + Movie had Coco dying in the third season, and many of you guys said her death was unnecessary. At the time I disagreed with this, thinking that the story had to continue like this for character development for Maya, but a comment made me think otherwise.

Instead of Coco dying, she would be cured in Season 3, and this would make Maya realize that she shouldn't be living with regret each day, and to live life fully in the present. This would result in more character development for Maya, while also letting Coco live to see the finale. Thank you all for the support from the 4 Season Series + Movie and the 13 EP Series

I mean, I can't be 100% sure if his design was meant to resemble a pirate, but let's be real, it pretty much does.

And the fact that there's a scene he and Kiki hanging out together, and Axel was placed right next to Kiki in a classmate photo, even if they were maybe not necessarily meant to be a couple, I have to doubt their relationship was kinda intentional.

I don't know. It would've been much more explicit if Massa had drawn an illustration about those two.

Mymy is more emo than goth but meh, it's the best official Mymy goth art I could find.

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Maya didn't have to bring up Coco's parents anyways.

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I was making a few shots for the Maya Sweet 16 shrot, and I wanted to make a scene that takes place outside the house. So I made this simple model to use for it.

it is free and can be used by anyone (except commertialy)

DOWNLOAD HERE

Idk why the image quality is so bad, but I found this over a year ago but I forgot where I got it from. Looks cool tho!!

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Something i made like waaaaay over a year ago, where i literally just put a Mymy in an existing thing but i forgot what the og was about. Anyways, uh yea idk. Mymy.

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Hice mi primer mod en l4d2 y decidí hacerlo de Maya! Con el modelo que libero LastInteraction en la comunidad.

me fue difícil porque soy completamente nuevo en esto, pero se logró, no es perfecto, pero es Maya!

Ongezellig if it was a 13 EP Series

A while ago, I made a story outlining 4 seasons + movie of Ongezellig, and this is the 13 EP version of that story. The original story is modified to make it more concise to fit 13 episodes. Technically there would be more content for each episode but then this post would have been too long.

EP 1: Pilot episode + more dialogue from Maya, Coco, Mymy, and Maya's imaginary friends.

EP 2: Maya's 16th birthday backstory is shown. Class representative elections between Mymy and Kiki. Mymy gets help from Stan to create posters, and Mymy and Kiki post flyers around the school.

After the class representative debate, the voting is done by class order and they each get nine votes. Maya is the tie-breaker vote. She is torn between Mymy and Kiki but she finally picks Mymy, making her the class representative.

EP 3: Mymy and Kiki hang out and play some soccer together, but they ruin Tryn's dress. Mymy does class representative activities and gets in trouble for implementing controversial policies. More character development for the main and side characters.

EP 4: Maya asks for advice from Mymy and Coco to become more confident. They say to gradually talk to more people, cut down on negative habits, and to be more clean. Maya showers which reveals her red tips of hair and we get a backstory from her past. In the present, Maya tries to talk to people in her group for a school project but messes up. Maya and Mymy walk together in the halls and they see an autistic kid with a special ed teacher. Maya and Mymy make faces and try not to laugh but fail horribly. This catches Vera's attention and they run away. "At least my day wasn't horrible", thinks Maya.

EP 5: Maya slowly starts to overcome her corn addiction and starts to eat and sleep better and decides to slowly talk to more people, although Maya’s mother, father, and bullies hinder her progress. Maya realizes she has an interest toward music and after receiving support from Coco and Mymy, decides to pursue it.

Maya attends a party with her sisters and overcomes more of her social anxiety but starts to get bullied by long-time bullies while at the party. Soei also gets angry at Maya for attending the party, even though she's fine with Coco and Mymy attending. Ravi listens to whatever Soei says. Maya goes back to black hair.

EP 6: Maya stands up to bullies with help from her sisters and gets over anxiety with interacting with her sisters. Maya sees Vera practicing her guitar and gets the courage to ask her about it. After talking to each other for a while, Vera decides to teach Maya how to play the guitar. Maya, Coco, and Mymy play the board game "Mens erger je niet!" together at the end of the episode. First half of Ongezellig complete.

EP 7: Maya, Coco, Mymy, Soei, and Ravi visit Amsterdam during the holidays and view the fireworks. Maya, Coco, and Mymy recall viewing the fireworks 10 years ago and promise to view the fireworks again 10 years in the future. After they go back to their hometown, Eiko meets Maya and reveals she is trying to find her sister. Eiko and Mymy meet on a chance encounter and they get to know each other after all these years.

EP 8: Despite Mymy's reluctance, Maya and Coco encourage Mymy to hang out with Eiko. Eiko and Mymy hang out, and after Eiko tells Mymy that she and their parents want Mymy to come back to Japan, a huge argument happens leading Mymy to run away. Mymy's backstory is revealed and she overcomes her trauma. Eiko understands why Mymy tries to be 100% Dutch but tells Mymy to never hate herself and gives Mymy her katana.

EP 9: Mymy and Kiki decide to sail to a small island during school break to claim it as their own. There they have a Katana (Mymy) vs Pirate Sword (Kiki) fight. Kiki barely wins the fight and they view the sunset together, planting a VOC and pirate flag on the island. More character development for Maya, Coco, Soei, and Ravi. There are more arguments happening between Maya and Soei.

EP 10: Entire class meets up to shop for materials for the school cultural festival. Maya sees a dress she loves but doesn't buy it due to her budget exceeding the limit (she's scared Soei will scold her). More plot development for the side characters.

EP 11: Coco rugby final match, Coco's team starts to lose but Coco gets a vision of her biological parents. Coco's backstory is revealed and she overcomes her trauma. Coco's National Rugby team wins the Rugby Europe Women's Championship.

EP 12: School festival commences, and many people have their own stations. At the end, Coco, Zoey, Yfke, and Cleo do a performance with Maya and Vera as special guests. Vera is happy again after a long time, and Maya truly becomes confident in those moments. Soei sees this and gets incredibly upset.

Ep 13: Maya and Soei have the biggest argument yet, where Soei says Maya's birth was a mistake. Maya finally stands up for herself, with Coco and Mymy standing up for her as well. The school year ends, and Kiki gives Maya the dress she had seen in the store as a gift. There is a two year time skip to the end of high school. Maya, Coco, Mymy, and the entire class graduate.

A few months later... Maya meets up with Coco on a ledge overlooking the landscape, wearing the dress Kiki gave her. Maya thanks Coco for helping her become fully confident, and Coco tears up and hugs Maya. Mymy comes and hugs both of them. When Maya is alone, her imaginary friends Anke and Epke appear and say she has done well and wish her all the best before leaving forever. Later, Mymy leaves for college, then Coco. Just as Maya is about to leave, Soei talks to Maya and Maya finally exposes the years of abuse from Soei and the neglect from Ravi. Maya says one last goodbye and closes the door.

Soei goes upstairs and sees Maya's childhood pictures. Soei's backstory is revealed where she was abused by her parents when she was young. She met Ravi in high school, where she subsequently got pregnant with Maya. Soei's parents, being of immigrant origin, got very angry with her. After Soei birthed Maya, her parents kicked Soei and Maya out. Soei and Ravi got a place together and raised Maya. However, due to increasing amounts of verbal abuse from Soei's family, she became bitter and started taking her anger out on Maya and Ravi. She harassed and physically abused Maya until Maya became more and more anxious, and made Ravi into a permissive husband. Soei later decided for the family to adopt Coco, then Mymy. Soei starts to realize she is at fault for ruining Maya's life and making the lives of others around her more difficult. When she's about to completely see the truth, her ego gets the best of her and she thinks she is not at fault whatsoever. She never apologizes to Maya.

10 years later...

Maya is now a musician and officially engaged. She also has her true reddish black hair. She walks through the streets of Amsterdam, now able to talk to strangers without difficulty, and to live life without fear, what she always wanted. She meets a girl and they talk for a while. The girl is afraid to ask someone a question, but Maya encourages the girl to do it and she does, which increases her confidence a little bit. When Maya is about to leave the girl asks Maya if she was ever socially anxious, to which Maya responds "Yes, I was just like you, a lot more anxious actually. But I overcame it, and I know you will too".

Maya meets with Coco, Mymy, Vera, and their friends in a restaurant and they all talk about their lives. Mymy has black hair as she fully accepts she is Japanese but still follows Dutch culture. Mymy and Coco got married, and Mymy pokes fun at Maya for "only" getting engaged. They all go to the place where Maya, Coco, and Mymy viewed the fireworks 10 years ago and the camera rises to show the city from above.

The End.