
Which One Do You Prefer?
Any suggestion you think might improve any of the designs is welcome!

Any suggestion you think might improve any of the designs is welcome!
I'm making a game around alchemy and its a bit inspired by Fullmetal Alchemist in that characters can alter substances at will (to an extent). That is only reserved for the very experienced, but I still want to emphasize a more grounded/ realistic idea of alchemy with the use of labs, philosophy and so on.
story context:
I made up an element that's very dangerous but also very promising called "silver water"/ "heaven silver" (not sure of the name yet). The protagonist is experimenting with it secretly but the experiments go wrong and his body is turned into a twisted mix of a silver like skin fused to his clothes and an organic interior. The game revolves around him trying to find a cure as the silvery exterior consumes his health.
Gameplay Implications:
I eventually thought of a dual health system where the player needs to heal the silver shell when cracked but also heal the organic interior to try to prevent the silver from expanding inwards.
For the exterior, I thought of using lapis infernalis (silver nitrate) which the protagonist would solidify and match the rest of the skin through his powers to fill in the cracks, but for the interior, I'm not sure.. I think aqua fortis (nitric acid) is the best thing to dissolve silver, and it supposedly even leaves silver nitrate behind which could add to the gameplay, but its highly toxic of course, and even with his powers, it seemed a bit silly that he could somehow get it only in the right places without affecting his vitals, but I have no experience with these substances so, maybe it could be worth doing and suffering some minor damage in such extreme circumstances? I have no clue of the damage it would actually cause.
The Question:
I was wondering if there's a substance, or substance combo, that most makes sense (with the protag.'s advanced abilities in mind) that I could use, while referencing some real alchemical knowledge, myths or historical ideas/ uses. Maybe there's something he could incase the aqua fortis with to protect himself from harm, heal his vitals, and only release the aqua fortis where needed, sort of like some pills we have today that only release the active substance at a specific point.
Any suggestions are welcome, but I want it to feel like it could be possible with his powers or that it makes sense on a surface level while tying it to alchemy. Thank you!
Olá a todos! Esta é a primeira vez que estou a publicar aqui e mal posso esperar para partilhar e falar de arte com outros artistas portugueses!
Esta pintura levou umas 70 horas no prazo duma ou duas semanas para um concurso. Infelizmente não ganhei ou tive muita atenção mas eu estou orgulhoso e contente com o que fiz na mesma. No entanto, há sempre espaço para crescer e eu próprio vejo coisas que podiam ser melhores mas, acima de tudo, gostava de saber o que acham, se gostam ou não, porquê e em que posso melhorar.
This is my first full horror soundtrack and my first time selling my music after 10 years of composing.
I'd like for anyone kind enough to take the time to take a listen to my album and let me know how I did, what could be improved musically and in the presentation, if you like it, if you don't like it (especially if you don't like it) and tell me why.
I'll be honest, my intention at first was to let people here know that I released my first album, but I honestly don't think anyone here is going to buy it so, I thought it would be more useful for me to get perspective and hear what people have to say instead if they can lend me their ear. Please be 100% honest.
I want to connect with people, discuss music and grow above all, I'm tired of indifference, I would prefer it if you tell me you don't like it than not say anything.
Here it is:
https://bahren.bandcamp.com/album/jack-street-original-soundtrack
Thank you for your attention 😄
I'm planning to sell my music for the first time this Friday with my first commissioned soundtrack and I was thinking of pricing each track at 1,50€.
The album is not long (~24 mins - 6 tracks), its a horror soundtrack and it has plenty of bonuses like 8 min of additional music, score sheets and album covers so it seemed reasonable to me to ask for that price.
Bandcamp seems to recommend lower and searching around I've found mentions that 1,50€ is a premium price which sounds a bit silly to me. Now, I understand that being too much if its an album that has a lot of tracks, but in my case, I think its pretty reasonable.
I'm pricing the album at 5/6€ (not sure yet) but I wanted to hear what people have to say here so that I understand the other side and so that I'm not being unfair.
You could say that being new this might be too much, but I've actually been composing for about a decade and I can say that my music is not amateurish and that the price is worth it.
I've been struggling to reach people for so long so I'd like to finally see some success and I'd really appreciate the help.
I'm using Linux Mint 22.1 Cinnamon 6.8.0
For a few months now my hard drive will randomly start filling up non-stop until it can't anymore. It seems to happen the most while playing games but it has happened while doing anything else or nothing at all. It seems to often coincide with when timeshift is creating a snapshot or be close to when that happens. It has also happened a few times in a week or once in a month and I can't pinpoint any pattern that's causing it to a good degree of certainty.
The thing that is causing the disk to get full is a bunch of errors and information I can't understand in the syslog and kern.log files. (I'll post screenshots in the replies)
Due to not understanding anything that's going on and having a lot of other stuff in life get in the way, my solution has been to run "sudo truncate -s 0 /var/log/syslog" and then same for syslog.1, kern.log and kern.log.1 to wipe out the logs and then delete whichever timeshift folder copied these logs.
That was working fine until today. PC was ok yesterday but when turning it on today several things happened:
WHILE BOOTING:
1 - PC boots, Mint logo shows up, password is asked and then the screen gets black
2 - Same as 1 but it gets stuck on the Mint logo and nothing else happens
3 - blinking cursor shows up on the top left on a black screen and nothing happens
4 - A prompt to choose to boot with regular Mint or recovery mode shows up and proceeding with regular can cause any of the above but starting in recovery mode, the few times I tried, worked fine but since it deactivates the drivers and I'm a game dev trying to get some work done I didn't keep it like that for long.
5 - One time it just prompted me with the Windows boot launcher from my second SSD which I was using before but haven't used in months (I didn't do this in the boot menu, it should've been Linux). Everything ran fine then, though a bit slow at the start, and I took the opportunity to export some stuff from a few programs that supposedly don't run on Linux so that I could open them in a different program. That took like an hour and everything was fine.
6 - Mint logo then "BusyBox v1.36.1 (Ubuntu 1:1.36.1-6Ubuntu3.1) built-in shell (ash) Enter 'help' for a list of built-in commands. (Initramfs) "
ON RARE OCCASIONS PC BOOTS ALL THE WAY:
1 - I put the password on Linux, everything seems normal, I can open and edit stuff but after ~10 minutes whatever window was open gets closed. (Timeshift seems to always be running when this happens but not right after booting but I may be wrong) The remaining windows that I had open still work for a minute or two more but I can't open anything else besides the startup menu. At this point the cursor changes to the Windows cursor too. Opening anything shows a weird clock cursor but nothing ever opens and the cursor returns to normal. When logging out or shutting down, most of the times the text above the options show up as solid white squares but the text in the options "restart, shut down", etc. look fine. One time half the stuff in the startup menu wasn't showing up and one time all the text was fine.
WHILE SHUTTING DOWN
1 - Black screen and it doesn't turn off until I physically turn it off
2 - Blinking cursor but same as 1
3 - Error text shows up. After the errors it was trying to log something into journal but couldn't write or rotate for whatever reason. (I'll post this text in the replies too)
4 - (In Windows/ 2nd SSD the PC could shut down by itself)
EXTRA CONTEXT IN PRECEEDING DAYS
This is probably very silly to mention but the only thing I can think of that was weird/ different yesterday is that I tried running a weird game called "Innards" on lutris. I swear this isn't a promo, the reason I bring it up is because I was the first to get it running on Linux as it is a game from 1 solo dev who made the engine too and I don't know if that could somehow affect the PC. I only thought of this because Lutris is the only place on Linux where I would see the Windows cursor so I thought there could be a connection... IDK it was the only different thing I did yesterday. Other than that, PC was quickly flashing text when turning it on and off for a week or two before this but it has happened before and this didn't happen.
Anyway, any help would be much appreciated. Thank you in advance to anyone that replies, its amazing to me so many take their time to help strangers with weird, tricky issues.