u/Appropriate-toast220

This is literally the first page mkayy- i just wanna see which font suits the webcomic better as well as being good for readability

The 1st on is the og, the then the last 2 attempts in order

I rlllyyy wanna get this out of the way because lettering is a a huge part (who wouldve guessed i knoww-)

But im struggling to find a cute font that fits the aesthetic (which is a more retro thang-) and is also readable😭

I really wanna get this down before i even draw more pages

Ok so i have like 2 character sheets with notes PLUS my new first page after the notes i got about the font i want to know if its and improvment from before so i have like..a before and after there

For the fonts i cycled through three. The 1st one is the og, the second one was another attempt and a 3rd was the final attempt since i was trying to find one that worked

I want to know which one is better based off of like aesthetics and how readable it is for people (since its a comic if ppl cant read it whats the point big dawg-)

I rlly wanna get this important aspect out of the way before i actually decide to make more pages😭😭

So like yeah those retro guys i was showing were part of this

Albeit this isnt like the full chapter obviously- i gotta write and draw all that BUT i am getting a feel for it rn to see how i can do it and if all goes well and i can pay for clipstudio i can actually work on the comic on there😭

I just wanna know if yall have any thoughts on it or if you like how it looks and stuff since ive changed some character designs PLUS i'd like to know if the yellowish tint is too much or if i should keep it

Im going for a retro vibe (like retro-futurism/aromic punk scifi) with these specific characters like old timey cartoon and 60s-80s look too so just kinda wanna see smth honestlyy

These are just the art and related stuff i have of them now

Ok albeit i dont think i'll be able to fully start soon i did decide to make a thumbnail what do yall think :>

I have like 2 main comic ideas for what I wanna do but this is just one of them that I got.

I am a minor and I don't exactly know how to get started on webtoin really BUTTTTT I really wanna gauge if ppl would like actually want to read it with this type of style and character design

Plus I do want to know what you guys would think it's about based on the asthetics alone

Mainly like their shape language and expressions because I'd like to know how well I conveyed how they're like in their poses

Ok sooo i made these characters mainly inspired off of retro-futurism and vinatge cartoons in a way

So i do have an artsyle for them but im more trying to emulate the old cartoon style

The new drawing is ofc the first one the last couple are the old ones- I would like to know if the new colour palettes/designs are better suited for the asthetic im going for and how to work more on those or if i should keep the old designs and try to make it fit what im goin for

So im kinda playing around with colour palettes and im kinda curious on which ones actually like work better pallete wise and stuff, im conflicted on if i should stick with the first ones i made or the new ones plus I am trying to make them look more vintage cartoonyy too