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I wonder,

How it feels to be chosen first?

I see,

Many people chose them first.

But never,

Has anyone chosen me.

They say,

“I suffer a lot, you can’t understand.”

So I,

Stand still, and smile.

Have you ever wondered what it feels like to be someone’s first choice? I’d love to know what you felt while reading this🍀

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I was sitting at the edge of the lake,

Finding some peace of mind,

Watching the greenery around me,

And listening to the birds

Singing their pretty songs.

I was gazing at the beauty of the butterfly

That sat on my hand,

And admiring the flowers

Which have a heavenly fragrance,

And observing the world's beauty.

I wanted to try something a little different this time and write without a rhyme scheme. 🌿 I just wanted to capture a quiet moment with nature and the little things that make the world feel beautiful.

What do you think? Does the free-verse style work for this poem? 🦋

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I was passing through that building,

And suddenly, I remembered the memories

Of where our journey began.

I still remember how we met,

And maybe this memory will be permanent,

And I won't be able to forget.

I wanna go back in time

And make everything right,

For what made us cross that line.

Our friendship was so cute,

And it suddenly got mute.

But before that, we enjoyed a lot.

We were mostly like siblings,

Who always acted silly and fought.

I hope when we meet again,

We regain our friendship like it was back then.

A little piece of my past that I suddenly remembered. I wrote this about an old friendship and the memories we once shared.

I wrote this from a place of nostalgia and a little hope of finding that friendship again.

What do you guys think? Should I make any changes, or keep it as it is? ♡

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I always shiver at night,

but nobody hears.

I become so cold,

yet nobody feels my fears.

I cry late at nights

because nobody hears.

Am I really that person

for whom nobody cares?

A little piece of my thoughts that I finally decided to share. I wrote this from a place of feeling unheard and alone. I hope someone out there can understand the feeling behind these words. ♡

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Your voice sounds so pretty, like a melody,

Which acted in my mind and heart as a remedy.

Your words are really comfortable;

You make me feel I am lovable.

You saved me from drowning in that dark, deep sea,

And made my spirit feel free.

My life was all grim

Until you came into my life like gleam.

I was going cold and quiver,

But you helped me flow my sour tears like a river.

When I was so sad and shiver,

You are the one who became the giver.

You give me a peaceful

Love shelter to stay,

And I promise I will stay, stay forever.

I'd love to know your thoughts about this poem written by me..and THANKS for reading it!!

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