u/Bignose_Ruler

Original post for context: Link

Revengeance post: Part 2 link

This part contains the Revering part of my magic system. Also containing the central bridge.

Original post for context: Link

Dream Revering post: Part 1 link

This part contains the Revengeance part of my magic system. Also containing the central bridge.

So, originally I went to the magic building subreddit and made this post there for review but all the replies were 'i CaNT rEAd!!!11one iTZ tu small!!!111one' So yeah, this subreddit is my last resort.

Ofcourse you may not be able to read because of the reddit compression and device constraints lol. I get that. So I have made zoomed in version posts of the two co-existing magic systems in my manga.

Links for both of the powersystems:

1. Part 1: Dream Revering & Central bridge

2. Part 2: Revengeance & Central Bridge

Why separate zoomed in version in parts? Well obviously as you can see this magic system is quite... vast.

So, I was doing writing for my manga based on a mod of Terraria known as Calamity. Designing fights and whatever, but one day I got struck with the realization that these fights are Hollywood basic, not the cool strategical fights like my favorite mangas like JJBA & JJK, and videogames like Undertale, Deltarune. So one day I sat down and thought to my self, I need a magic system asap. And I realized, I can just make it based on my central theme of my own manga, that is dreams and revenge. (Which is kinda me). With Undertale, Deltarune, JJK and JJBA as my main riding forces of inspiration.

Through 8 iterations and 3 months of hard work, I have designed the magic system which I am glad to call it my own. Now all I require is the analysis of it. And I don't want my own bias. That is why I am handing it to you for your input.

My questions to you all is:

1. What do you find unique about this system?
2. What is your most favorite and least favorite mechanic?
3. What is your most favorite concept and least favorite concept?
4. Your overall verdict on how good/bad it is.
5. what contradictions, problems you find in this system?

I know this might be stupidly big and information overload, spell errors with many ramblings for you, so here's my proposal, read it progressively, whenever you get time, just do a casual read. Whenever bored, just read 2-3 mechanics. And please, give it an honest review.

That's all. I will be highly obliged for your input.

I'll start out with the point,

1. I need 4 dexterity. (defentretion boots require 40 Dexterity)

2. Also fix this negative regeneration problem. (Overall build negates my hp regen)

Build link I Spent 400k, 66% of my entire bank, and now I am broke. Helppp.

Just to mention I am a casual player who do not want to be associated with guild stuff. I am a bi-weekly kind of guy.

Ok, so basically I am a newbie and don't really know how builds work, I've been using morph and cascade for over 2 years, and thats why for a refreshment, I looked around the internet and found this non-mythic build, a futulism build, I have always had a terrible DPS of 10k to 20k, and wanted to switch around to high DPS build I can do for raids to earn enough money for a mythic.

(Yeah I have never gotten a mythic in my 3 years of wynncraft) So I've heard there is guild tomes which provide skillpoints, so is there any dexterity tome? Other than that I lose life whenever I hit an enemy, so is there any way to prevent that? like do you even require to melee the enemy in a riftwalker play-style?

I've also scoured for any rings that can provide both dexterity and intelligence, at the same time retaining a similar mana regen. But I don't know, and honestly I don't wanna waste my emeralds in a broken build. So please, I need your help.

Also How do I turn off this golden overlay I got by touching the end credits ND's flower? Even colors my weapons and their attacks to, so annoying. (Its somewhat cool tho.)

So yeah I finally beat ND in 77 attempts and hence completed WotG. After which I got my hands on this item, the Infernum Hyperplane matrix does enables immortality, and disables it. But after enabling it once, and clicking disable, it does not disable it. How do I disable it?

So yeah tried disabling it, Did nothing, and re-clicking the Eternal garden flower just makes me golden again, great.

Any solutions for both of these problems? I will be greatly obliged.

What you see here... 3 years of dreaming, learning, writing, creating systems, discarding of iterations and constantly improving in art.

This is Fabled, Cruel Calamity, my manga that I have strive for the past 3 years, as for 10 Years of Calamity I will show you the line work I've been working on for the past several days.

You may notice some familiar faces and strangers, I'll leave your imagination to work on that.

The cover is still bare-bones yes, but I shall move on to coloring next. If you want to, you can color it too, for fun or envy, dunno.

Well any questions shall be answered. Just give me the call. For those who remembered and waited eagerly , I thank you.

Building! My creative sector in this action-focused sandbox game.

210 hours in! Last time 80, more than double.

Fabled Cruel Calamity has moved onto the concept arts. Now to be illustrated.

Love this community, the game and my dedication, moving on to post-moon lord!

P.S they should really buff Polterghast in the Hog Wild update, too easy to take down in just pre-guardians gear.

Building! My creative sector in this action-focused sandbox game.

210 hours in! Last time 80, more than double.

Fabled Cruel Calamity has moved onto the concept arts. Now to be illustrated.

Love this community, the game and my dedication, moving on to post-moon lord!

P.S they should really buff Polterghast in the Hog Wild update, too easy to take down in just pre-guardians gear.

^(Yeah, Keen eye, shall reveal the zipper style eleph~ font in background.)

This is indeed the concept, (Rough) of Terrariand in my story Fabled Cruel CALAMITY. (Yes, the name has changed from The tale of the cruel calamity to fabled cruel yadyadayda you get it.)

This is also my first time properly handing digital art, with my finger of course, cause I cant find my stupid stylus, yeah... so have a taste of my poor skills!

Although the rough sketch had been done in IRL, cause no stylus. The unofficial coloring is done on it digitally, so many other things as well.

Tried to really capture that jojo's pop aesthetic, but not quite made it. Also tried to get the wackiness of the early game characters, as this is pre-boss Terrariand. Tell me if I achieved that?

Took too long, not proud of that, have to work with my grueling schedule, 10^(th) grade is merciless.

Be safe Terrariand, we need you.