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Mara had lived alone in the hollow for three quiet years. She liked the stillness. The way the fog clung to the ridges in the morning. The way sound carried strangely at dusk, bouncing off the mountains like the land was whispering to itself.

She liked the routine of it — coffee at dawn, tending the garden, evenings on the porch listening to the woods breathe.

The first time she noticed the mockingbird, it was perched on the same branch outside her bedroom window. A little gray thing, nothing special. It chirped, trilled, and then — perfectly — barked like her old dog, Jasper.

Jasper had been dead for six months.

She told herself mockingbirds were just like that. Everyone in town said so. They mimicked anything they heard. Trucks. Kids. Coyotes. Even the creak of her porch swing.

But the next morning, it mimicked her voice.

Just one word — a soft, breathy “hello,” exactly the way she said it when answering the phone.

She froze. The bird cocked its head, as if waiting for her reaction.

“Go on,” she muttered, shooing it away. “Get.”

It didn’t move.

Over the next week, the bird’s mimicry sharpened. It repeated conversations she’d had on the phone. Arguments she’d had with her ex. A lullaby her mother used to hum when Mara was small.

Then it repeated something she hadn’t said aloud in twenty years — a secret she whispered once as a child, alone in the woods behind her grandmother’s house.

She dropped her coffee mug when she heard it. The bird didn’t flinch.

That night, she heard tapping on her bedroom window. Not pecking — tapping. Like knuckles.

She snapped the blinds open.

The bird sat on the branch, but its silhouette was wrong. Too tall. Too long. Like something crouching behind it.

When she blinked, the shape snapped back to normal.

Then the bird spoke in her voice.

“Let me in.”

Mara slammed the blinds shut.

She tried to ignore it. She tried to tell herself she was tired, stressed, imagining things. But the bird kept coming back. Every morning. Every evening. Sometimes in the middle of the night.

And its voice kept improving.

By the end of the second week, it could speak full sentences in her tone. Her cadence. Her breath patterns.

It didn’t sound like imitation anymore.

The woods grew quieter. No crickets. No owls. Even the creek behind the house seemed to hush when the bird arrived.

One morning, she stepped outside to confront it — to chase it off for good — but the branch was empty.

The bird was gone.

The silence felt heavy, like the hollow was pressing in, becoming smaller.

Mara walked to the edge of the yard, scanning the trees. No flutter of wings. No chirping. 

Nothing.

Then she saw it — the nest.

It sat low in a thicket, half-hidden under a tangle of briars. She’d never noticed it before. It looked wrong. Too big for a mockingbird. Too deep. The woven sticks were splintered, shredded, as if something had clawed its way out.

No feathers.

No eggshells.

Just a faint indentation in the dirt, like something heavy had stood there for a long time.

A cold ripple crawled up her spine.

She turned to go back inside.

That’s when she heard it.

Her voice.

Not the bird’s thin, fluttering impersonation.

Not the airy echo with the faint tremor of wings.

This was deeper.

Fuller.

From the tree line, “Come here.”

Mara froze.

The woods swallowed the sound too quickly, like they were helping hide whatever made it.

Then again, closer, “Come here. I need you.”

Her exact voice.

Her breath.

Her tone.

But spoken from a chest that wasn’t hers.

The trees stood still.

The hollow held its breath.

The voice waited.

“Mara.”

Her name, spoken perfectly.

She took one step back toward the house.

The voice followed, now just beyond the first row of pines:

“Don’t go. Come here.”

Her breath caught.

And the voice calls again, softer, “Come get me.”

She ran for the house.

The first thing you need to understand is that in my town, dogs disappear all the time.

I don’t mean once a year. I mean constantly.

Hunting dogs. Farm dogs. Mutts tied up behind trailers. Expensive shepherds people drove clear to Charleston to buy. Doesn’t matter. Every few weeks somebody’s posting in the gas station or the Facebook group about hearing barking up on the ridge and then finding an empty yard the next morning.

And around here, nobody panics.

Because they always come back.

Three days. That part never changes.

Three days gone, then they come scratching at the porch right before sunrise.

I grew up with that rule the same way you grow up knowing not to walk creek beds after heavy rain or not to whistle in the woods at night. It was just something people accepted.

Dogs go missing.

Dogs come back.

Whether you want them to or not.

I left Mercer County, WV when I was nineteen and stayed gone almost twelve years. Long enough to forget how quiet these mountains get after dark. Long enough to convince myself the stories sounded ridiculous.

Then my dad had his stroke.

So I came back to help Mom with the house for a while until he got steady on his feet again. My stay was supposed to be temporary. Yet…that was six months ago.

The dog belonged to my father technically, though everybody knew she was mine the second I moved back in. Her name was Junie. Bluetick coonhound. Sweetest thing alive. Slept with her heavy head in your lap and snored like an old man in church.

She followed me everywhere.

The morning she disappeared, I knew something was wrong before I even got out of bed.

The sound of nails clicking on hardwood was absent. There was no whining outside my door.

Just silence.

Downstairs, I found the back door hanging open, with my momma standing barefoot in the kitchen holding her coffee with both hands.

“Did you let Junie out?” I asked.

She didn’t answer immediately.

That should’ve been my first warning.

Finally she said, “Your daddy forgot to latch the door last night.”

Outside, the mountains were buried in fog. Thick enough the tree line looked smeared into the sky.

Without another thought, I left through the same door Junie would have had to, whistling for her the moment I stepped out onto our old wooden back porch.

Nothing.

I walked the property calling her name.

Nothing.

I came back an hour later to find Dad sitting in his recliner staring at the muted television. Half his face still drooped some from the stroke.

“Probably chasing deer,” he muttered.

But he wouldn’t look at me when he said it.

By noon I was driving the back roads checking ditches and vacant fields. Junie wasn’t the kind of dog to wander. She stayed close. Always had.

At the gas station, old Earl Haskins glanced up from his scratch-offs when I came in asking if anybody’d seen her.

“Bluetick?” he asked.

“Yeah.”

He nodded slowly like that explained everything, “She’ll come back.”

With my hands on my hips I blew out a hard breath, “I hope so.”

Earl just stared at me over the top of his glasses, “You leave the porch light off when she does.”

Something about the way he said it prickled my skin.

“Why?”

“Just do.”

Then he looked back down at his tickets like the conversation was over.

That night Mom made me close all the curtains before dark. Not because of bears or people. However, she kept glancing toward the windows like she expected somebody or something to be standing there.

“You still believe all that stuff?” I asked finally when her furtive glances had started to prickle my nerves.

“What stuff?” She asked in response, but her eyes still drifted toward the window.

“The dog stories.”

She folded a dish towel too carefully.

“When I was little,” she said quietly, “my daddy had a shepherd named Buck.”

I already knew this story. Everybody did.

“Buck disappeared for three days. Came back scratching at the front door before sunrise.” She swallowed. “My daddy said the dog looked at him like a stranger wearing Buck’s skin.”

I rolled my eyes a little.

“Mom—”

“He shot him.”

That stopped me.

She stared at the sink while she spoke, “Said whatever came home wasn’t right.”

The kitchen felt colder suddenly, “You never told me that part.”

“People don’t like hearing the ending.”

That first night I barely slept. Around three in the morning I woke up needing water. The house was dead quiet when I heard it.

Scratching.

Slow. Deliberate.

At the back door.

My stomach dropped.

I hurried through the dark kitchen and reached for the porch light instinctively before remembering Earl’s warning.

Leave the porch light off.

I don’t know why I listened.

Maybe because suddenly I didn’t want whatever was outside knowing I was there.

The scratching came again.

Not excited scratching.

Not happy.

Patient.

I leaned toward the window over the sink but all I could see was darkness and my own reflection. Then something breathed against the glass. I stumbled backward hard enough to hit the counter. The breathing continued. Wet and heavy.

“Junie?” I whispered.

Silence.

Then slowly—

Tap.

Tap tap.

Three knocks against the door.

Not scratches.

Knocks.

Every hair on my body stood up. Dogs don’t knock.

I backed away from the door so fast I nearly fell. A second later something moved across the porch outside. Slow footsteps creaking across old wood.

Then nothing.

I didn’t sleep the rest of the night.

At sunrise I opened the back door with Dad’s shotgun in my shaking hands but there was nothing.

No Junie.

No paw prints.

Just muddy streaks across the porch boards.

Three long lines that looked like fingers dragged through wet dirt.

Dad found me washing them off with the hose, but he said nothing. He just stood there staring, his shoulders slumped like they were carrying the same weight mine were. 

That third night the fog rolled in so thick it swallowed the entire yard.

Dad locked every door before sunset. Mom pulled the curtains shut so tightly not even the moonlight could slip through.

Around midnight Junie started barking outside.

I shot upright in bed instantly.

That bark was unmistakable.

Deep. Loud. Frantic.

Relief crashed through me so hard it almost hurt.

I ran downstairs before either of my parents could stop me.

Junie barked again from the porch.

Scratching followed.

Fast this time.

Excited.

I reached the back door and heard Mom behind me.

“Don’t open that.”

“It’s Junie.”

“Don’t.”

I ignored her.

I don’t know if it was exhaustion or hope or just stupidity, but the second I heard her whine outside I unlocked the deadbolt.

The barking stopped immediately. A chill slid down my spine, but I opened the door anyway, hope outweighing fear.

Junie sat there in the dark.

Mud caked her legs and belly. Her ribs showed more than before. One ear hung torn open.

But it was her.

I almost cried from relief.

“Jesus Christ,” I whispered.

She didn’t move. Usually she’d launch herself at me hard enough to knock me over. Now she just sat there staring.

Behind me, Mom whispered, “Look at her eyes.”

I did.

At first they seemed normal.

Then Junie blinked.

Dogs’ eyes catch light strangely sometimes. Anybody who’s driven mountain roads at night knows that green-yellow reflection.

But there was no light outside. Still, her eyes reflected something — a pale silver shimmer moving deep behind her pupils, like moonlight beneath water. 

Junie stood slowly. Every instinct in my body screamed at me not to touch her. But then she gave a small, familiar whine that cracked my resolve just a little — just enough. 

“Come here, girl.”

She stepped inside.

The second her paws crossed the doorway, every sound outside stopped.

No crickets.

No frogs.

Nothing.

Junie walked past me without wagging her tail.

Without sniffing.

Without looking at anyone.

Straight down the hallway toward Dad’s room.

Dad made a terrified sound I’d never heard from him before, “Don’t let her in there.”

Too late.

Junie stopped outside his bedroom door and stared at it.

Then she began growling.

Low.

Deep.

Wrong.

Almost human.

Dad’s breathing turned ragged, “Get her out.”

Junie turned her head slowly toward him…and smiled. She didn’t bare her teeth. She wasn’t showing aggression. It was just that. A smile. Measured and menacing. Dogs don’t do that. 

I grabbed her collar instinctively and froze.

Her fur was soaking wet.

The smell hit me next.

Rot and mud. Something stagnant.

Junie’s head twisted toward me farther than it should have.

Then she spoke.

Not words exactly.

More like somebody trying to force human sounds through the wrong throat.

“Hhhhhome.”

Mom screamed. I let go instantly and stumbled backward just far enough that Junie had the chance to lunge. 

From down the hall, Dad fired the shotgun he must have grabbed from the entry closet.

The blast deafened the entire house.

Junie hit the wall hard enough to rattle picture frames.

For one second she lay still. All of us were barely breathing. 

Then she stood back up, half her face gone. Underneath wasn’t flesh. It looked hollow. Dark and wet inside like a cave, something moving just beneath the surface.

Dad kept screaming for me to get her out.

I don’t even remember moving.

I grabbed Junie’s back legs while she snapped and writhed and dragged her across the floor toward the porch.

Her body felt wrong beneath my grip. Like there were more bones inside her than there should have been.

The second I shoved her over the threshold, she stopped fighting.

Just stood in the yard staring at us, blood dripping from ruined fur onto the grass.

Then slowly, impossibly, the wound began knitting itself shut. My breathing went shallow as flesh shifted beneath the skin, rearranging itself piece by piece. Something underneath was unfolding to heal the damage. But it all looked wrong 

Dad slammed the door.

Locked it.

We kept every light in the house off for the rest of the night.

Junie paced the porch until sunrise.

We heard her nails clicking back and forth for hours.

Sometimes scratching.

Sometimes knocking.

Three knocks.

Always three.

Just before dawn, the pacing stopped.

Junie was gone. The only sign left of her were muddy footprints across the porch. But not just hers, hundreds of them.

Different sizes.

Different breeds.

All leading to the back door.

Like they’d gathered there overnight.

___________

“We didn’t talk about it. What could we say? Every explanation defied logic, and when you’re scared, confused, upset… logic is the one thing you want to hold onto.” 

Dad died two months later. Another stroke.

It wasn’t long after that mom declared she was selling the house. As I helped her pack I would sometimes hear her muttering to herself, ‘They know where the door is now.’

I live in Ohio these days. Mom moved even farther away, to a state that doesn’t even border the one we used to call home. 

I moved into an apartment complex. No woods nearby. No mountains. No dog allowed.

I still wake up sometimes around three in the morning thinking I hear scratching outside my door.

But the thing that finally made me write this happened last week.

I was driving home from work when I saw flyers taped to telephone poles all down my street.

MISSING DOG.

Golden retriever.

Answers to Daisy.

Last seen near the wooded bike trail behind the apartments.

I stood there staring at the picture too long. Because somebody had written something across the bottom in black marker.

Four words.

DON’T LET HER IN.