THE CHAPMANS - Pilot 1st draft

Title - The Chapmans Pilot Episode
Format - Tv
Page length - 20 pages
Status - First draft
Genre - Post-apocalypse, zombies, adventure, drama
Logline - Twenty years after the zombie outbreak, a young boy, along with his grumpy and hardened father, travels the world as they struggle to find meaning in the new world together
Feedback concern - Do you think a TV show like this, where the main characters just explore the world after the outbreak, is feasible and enjoyable to watch? I also wanted to know if I did the oner correctly, and if the dialogue is great. thank you!!

THE CHAPMANS

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u/Clevn_wut — 1 day ago

Does A.I really have no place for creative writing?

People HATE anything that has to do with A.I, and while I do agree that using it can be in some way lazy, can't it also be helpful?

It's pretty scary to even talk about A.I in a positive way because you don't know the kind of backlash you'll get from other people (consider Scorsese). But I'm a young writer who has used AI as a tool to develop my craft, while also avoiding to use it dependently. But it is considerably convenient to have around no?

I understand the necessity of the AI hate train in this day and age, these billionaires should be taken accounted for. But do you guys really think that AI has no place for writing?

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u/Clevn_wut — 2 days ago
▲ 15 r/Screenplay+2 crossposts

Just finished my first draft and I'm looking for feedback

Title - Evertree Pilot episode
Format - Tv/or animation
Page length - 35 pages
Status - First draft
Genre - Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery
Logline - Scott, a boy born with no magic, has to navigate a world that operates on one after the kidnapping of his father.
Feedback concern - All feedback is welcome, but I want to know if the pacing, the concept, characters are interesting enough to hold an audience, and if I should add or reduce some scenes.

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u/Clevn_wut — 8 days ago