u/Crazy_Checkers

What do you think of my Character? I am trying Digital Art Again, and i need some criticism and some pointers. He's called "Checkmate Trooper."

u/Crazy_Checkers — 6 days ago

No this is not me being “Lazy” for the designs. Because Rubicon High is splintered off, Rubicon uses the same uniform, but with few but different changes to it.

u/Crazy_Checkers — 17 days ago

The “Ingraved Korpse” (Engraved Corpse) “They Traded Armor and Weapons for, Frames, and Cowedly Speed.” - “The Brainwashing High command of Super Earth.”

Consists of new units: “Suiciders” (Rebuilt automatons with no armor, and explode on impact, and no arms, they also do light armor penetration when they explode up close, and they do a chain reaction too)

“Skeletal Frames” (Zombie automatons rebuilt to serve with undead code, and they don’t have armor, but they are strictly melee and look like a robotic frame) These guys also drag dead automaton bodies to “Birth Fabricators”

The main units is the Berserkers, a new one called the “Neck Culler” is introduced (They are zombified devastators, mixed with Berserker parts, they can jump and sprint, they do have light armor, but they can do medium armor penetration, as they have a Devastator cannon arm, shotgun arm to be precise, that shoots shrapnel, it also has a Tube connects to a backpack full of shrapnel)

Another version called the “Bone Grinders” have a more scary and dangerous look, usually only having a bloodied appearance with added bones, and steel shrapnel. They are more danger berserker’s, with four thin arms instead of two, and they are very skinny and frail, as they can sprint faster. They can hang from pools, and even do violent take downs.

There is also 2 hulk units, the “Fat Man” (Suicider Hulk with no arms and can make a bigger blast force, like the Hellbomb, however the Fat Man is more rarer on the battlefield, and only arrives in when you sound the alarm)

And the “Meat Grinder” (A Hulk scorcher, but instead of a flamer arm they have the buzzsaw arms only, they also have a mortar on their back that shoots shrapnel)

And finally the Ingrave Korpse have their own tank unit. A Factory Strider, this is the “Korpse Reviver” it revives enemies on the ground by taking their bodies and manufacturing them into their new forms. (Notably if you fight this Sub-faction, it’s the only enemies you fight, as no other automatons are seen. No Jet Brigade, no Incineration corps, maybe the cyborg legion, but overall. None of them, it shows there brutal and horrific nature.)

More Notably, this is surprisingly a commando operation. The Helldivers must go to the now found planet called “Korpse-6” a dead planet and battleground, which will have automaton corpses everywhere, and even then it’s more scary when you see skeletal frames dragging these bodies to process them into new Ingraved Korpse units. The Helldivers will also find Stratagem “Screamers” they don’t jam your stratagems for the super destroyer is long gone, as it abandoned the Helldivers souls onto Korpse-6 (Until called in) it gives off the screams of Super earth citizens being tortured and ground up by this subfaction.

And the Ingraved Korpse will march towards super earth, to make it into their “Heaven.” The Helldivers must destroy them, and it will not be an easy fight, as the Ingraved Korpse will be destroyed temporarily, but come back again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again. They will always come back.

Korpse-6 must be destroyed, the DSS will have to bombard it, and destroy them all, but I do have scary idea, the Ingraved Korpse hijack different Pelican-1’s and super destroyers. To escape not to be “Cowards” but another part of the plan, they planned for their planet to be found, and destroyed, so they can take the Super Destroyers. And once done, they return to Korpse-6 for round two, they left, and came back. But with new units

”Mind Flayers” (Their version of Gunships, with added screamer towers, to scream and at the Helldivers. They don’t have guns or anything, they are made to scare and entice fear into the Helldivers)

“Evening Walk” (Their version of the War Strider, but with added sharpness and shrapnel projectiles. Hence the name, they only come out in the evening and night. And leave during the day. They intentionally make loud noises and make themselves known. So you can react enough and run away. Fighting it is usually a death sentence, as it fires immediately when you see it.)

and finally “Gutters” (Their version of Shredder tanks, as they shoot out fast shredded shrapnel that scream out tortured screams, but the Gutters are more weaker. As they can be destroyed with a single anti tank rocket, or thermite.)

The entire battle will be like malevelon creek, and CyberStan, you liberated it once, and you have to liberate it again, instead of a cape, you get an armor set instead. The armor is the SA-25 Steel Trooper mixed with berserker parts, like the robotic limbs being the arms and legs of the Berserker, however both arms and legs are robotic. The helmet is the SA-25 Steel Trooper helmet mixed with the IE-57 Hell-Bent helmet. The armors passive ability is called “Culled Fear” (It makes lesser enemies fear the player and run away, like the Terminid Scavengers, Pouncers, Bile Spitters, Hunters, Shriekers, Warriors and hive guardians to run away in fear. Automaton Troopers, Brawlers, Commissars, Rocket Raiders, Marauders, and MG, Raiders to even freeze up and even back up and away upon seeing you, because their sensors see you as a “Virus” that is too much to “Delete”. And for the Illuminate, only the Voteless run away from you in fear, and Overseers shake in terror upon seeing you.) The Armor is called F3-AR Culling Reaper. (F3-AR is Actually spelled to sound like FEAR)

Yes the voice even changes when the armor is equipped, to be a low raspy and ragged whisper. (Depending on what voice the Player picked for their Helldiver)

u/Crazy_Checkers — 19 days ago

The father and mother hate and despise each other, but the father loves his son, while the mother wants to kill “Her Son”. The only reason Bloomie is even Church‘s wife, is because she manipulated him. Promising she wouldn’t kill Alastor, in exchange, she is in his life and family. Bloomie is pulling his strings, and brain. Church is 6’5” slightly taller than Alastor being 6’2”. But bloomie is around 6’11.5“ tall. However, Church doesn’t know, Bloomie already has a lover named “Mister Cutter.” (Her boxcutter arm)

u/Crazy_Checkers — 20 days ago