u/Dry-Lock4411

Hey guys, hope you're doing well!

Just finished this commission and I’m a bit torn. I really enjoyed working on the story and the flow here, but I feel like I went a bit overboard with the character's posing in the first panel.

I was trying to make them look really tense and ready to bolt, but I'm worried the exaggeration is a bit too much. Does the anatomy here feel okay to you guys, or does it look forced?

Would love your honest thoughts!

I'm finally sharing the next part of this story. After the sunset scenes from the last three pages, I really wanted to change the perspective here. The first panel is a very close up moment of connection, but the second one opens up to show the world they are starting to explore together.

I’ve been trying to push myself with drawing larger backgrounds and landscapes lately, so I’d love to hear what you think of the bottom panel. Does the sense of scale feel right? Any feedback on the transition from the tight close up to the wide view would be great too.

Thanks in advance!

Hey everyone, hope the title isn't confusing, the thing I want to ask is basically that I’ve spent a lot of time doing storyboarding and visual consulting for different projects, but recently I’ve been reading light novels and noticed that there is a different kind of art style transition and it is pretty interesting to see.

I’m curious to know from the writers/readers here, what do you usually look for in LN illustrations? Is it more about the atmosphere or just clean character designs? Do let me know!

Thank you in advance!

Hey guys, just finished the next few panels of the story I’ve been sharing here. After everything the wolf went through in the last update, I really wanted to capture this quiet moment of connection. Seeing them finally rest together feels like a big turning point.

Let me know what you think of the colors on the sunset panel, I spent way too much time trying to get that glow right!