u/E_man15

Looking for impressions on my first novel

I've been wanting to write this novel for a long time, and a while back I finally started. It's a classic adventure story. Three best friends must go on a quest to solve an ancient mystery. Advanced technology, space travel, and an inter-galactic society. But it also has sword fights, castles, and maybe just a hint of magic. I'm about 24k words in, but you don't need to read the whole thing. I just want to know people's general impressions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TKDcP93bd6BamqTrZvdX9W9cftfR49xW4kqAg0l-qkA/edit?tab=t.0

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u/E_man15 — 7 days ago