[general] fanfic help?
Hello! This is my first time ever writing here on reddit in the PJO fandom (i wrote in others but never this) Percy Jackson has always been one of the most characters i deeply loved and i always read fanfics but never had the courage to make one, NOW i want to do that and im reading again the main books but I have a genuine question that maybe another fan outsider could give me a hand or an opinion.
I did my oc i wrote her down because i wanted to a love story between her and Percy (i love Annabeth and i love her and Percy, so i mean no badness really) and j kinda just wanted a truthful opinion (for whoever read this post) about my oc!
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My OC is a daughter of Demeter and her personality is that she is kind, gentle, caring, very welcoming and non judgement UNLESS its a person who is very cruel or bad or that doesn't wanna reason at all. My idea was that she was always open to Percy and encouraged him but also held him back a few times to make him reason or focus better but she isn't the type to stop him to obstale him but more like because she worries about him deeply. She is senstive and also has a big heart and doesn't want to show it off.
Her flaws are that she is stubborn herself, loyal to a fault, sometimes she may appear way too sarcastic and she is also the kind of person who once you truly hurt her for good she will hold grunge till death (im sorry i dont know if i got the word right), in battle or training she can be ruthless which im not sure if it's a flaw or a good thing. She also is very paranoid and has a trust issue that is massive (pardon her childhood trauma as it finest) and also she can appear sometimes very cynical when she is in bad mood so she could take back without meaning although sometimes it feels a reality check.
I was told to say her fatal flaw and hers its having a senstive heart at the end of the day no matter how she hide it.
My question is, if you guys think romantically she would fit for Percy as a girlfriend, based on the canon of the books mostly...i hope i didn't bother.
Anyways, thanks for whomever answer this!