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Hi, I’ve written songs before, but haven’t posted them anywhere yet. This isn’t one of my first attempts at writing songs, but I’d love the feedback.

Title: Just the Birds and Me.
Intro.
upbeat groovy piano with quiet acoustic guitar in the background and light percussion Verse 1. This feeling in my heart is tearing me apart.
What am I to do? This feeling is so new.
If I could fly high up there in the sky,
I would feel alive, then my dream would finally come true. Prechorus. if I could just unfurl my wings and head up to that bright blue sky, that would be all right with me if I could only fly. chorus. I would feel so free if it was just me,
High up in the clouds where the wind is the only sound.
I would shout hooray if there were a way,
I could glide through the trees, just the birds and me. verse 2. My dreams have showed me what I can do with such a power That’s oh so true, but once I wake for those wings, my heart does ache Prechorus. if I could just unfurl my wings, and head up to that bright blue sky that would be all right with me if I could only fly. chorus. I would feel so free if it was just me,
High up in the clouds where the wind is the only sound.
I would shout hooray if there were a way,
I could glide through the trees, just the birds and me. bridge. In my dreams, I’ve glided over land and see, but sadly in the real world that’s not me. My hopeful heart is tied down to this cold hard ground. Final chorus. I would feel so free if it was just me,
High up in the clouds where the wind is the only sound.
I would shout hooray if there were a way,
I could glide through the trees, just the birds and me.

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u/Fay_Stella_13 — 12 days ago

Just looking for some friends that I can talk to about anything from Cryptid to weirdly obscure songs to cats

Hi, I’m Fay. I’m 20. I’m a female and I’m completely blind. I have a cat named Gabriel. Who’s a complete menace I love listening to creepy pastas and anything about Cryptids and SCPs. Like seriously I will debate on the differences between a Bigfoot and a Wendigo and talk about my favorite SCP‘s. I also love swimming. I like to listen to punk music and emo music just a 2000s kind of girl with music also for some weird reason I’ve always been interested in the cardiovascular system anyway if anyone wants to chat feel free to DM me no one under 18 and no one over 30 gender doesn’t matter

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u/Fay_Stella_13 — 5 months ago