u/Financial_Pirate_853

Critique hand drawn character for indie comic

Critique hand drawn character for indie comic

Is my style to close to viziepops. The fishnets work as armor. She has powers to create any substance she wants from her skin glands(like poison healing goop,acid(it'll burn her too),coffee). i didn't have time for full inking. Do i need to refine art. I admit i need to fill in blacks better. and slightly wonky reactions

u/Financial_Pirate_853 — 8 days ago

Is this cliche for a comic

Possible Cliche 1: an apostcalypic watseland where cities are built upon walking platforms(very different feels for each one like cyberpunk lawless and a flashy dressoca inspired one) to protect from the wasteland before, a scientist group long ago created the art of soul stealing to stop death and it ruined the world with the by product. Everyone is masked due to a reason to be soon revealed. a group of mercenaries(who have creative powers and outfits not overdone spandex) who have hidden secrets soap opera drama and relatable banter uncover a scene to continue soul stealing. An action comedy

Possible cliche 2: the mercenaries meet for the first time after being assigned a team and one is shy and hides(shy due to backstory) they find her and they ask her questions no answer she never talks completely silent throughout issue one.

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u/Financial_Pirate_853 — 8 days ago
▲ 1 r/Rants

Ai is a dumb gluttonous declining

 have been using the ai overview, it's been forgetting stuff and mixing up names.It's just be straight up moronic my dogs are smarter than a immortal tech being that can do math in seconds. I was seeing what bosses hornet(a video game character) respects and despises it mixed up names like "cogwork dancers" to "clover dancers" did the same boss twice when i said a new batch. The reason i believe for this decline is due to the sheer amount of content it's eating it can't keep up with production of content so it inbreeds on ai made content and congrats you grew a moron that uses tons of power. That could be going to an african village. Waht the heck google make it efficent and smart if we are gonna use power, not a litreral dunce, and microsoft could look at this too. Humans can do all that ai can who even uses algorthirims i pick my spotify songs,subreddits,youtube video manually(am i weird), which ai has no use in my life and a simple texas instructment can do the same math stuff as an ai chatbot. The dating is where it gets bad get a life and a real partner, i get some people like robots and i'm fine with that but if it looks human,or has a human persona pleases find a real spouse, and character ai that should be not exist that is what roll playing with a fried is for.

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u/Financial_Pirate_853 — 8 days ago