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Is my graphic novel project DOA?

(Art by Ralph Barrientos, Lettering by KamThings)

I'm an unpublished writer. About a year back I wrote a 140 page dark fantasy graphic novel script, with the intention of submitting it to agents. But as I was learning more about the industry, and posting my query letter for reviews, I started getting some worrying comments that suggested the project wasn't viable in the first place, that no agent would pick it up because no publisher would consider it. Not for the content itself, just the circumstances around it. So I got cold feet and never sent out any queries. So the script has been gathering dust ever since.

Thing is, I'm still really proud of it, it's some of my best writing yet, and I'm thinking... if I already have the script, and I paid an artist and letterer to make gorgeous sample pages, I might as well query it. But even that would take time and effort, so if the script is completely DOA it's not worth it. But now I can't get that thought out of my head, so I figured I'd ask around to see if anyone has more insight.

Here are all the things that might work against the project:

  • I hired an artist to make the sample pages. His work is incredible as you can see, and he's on board for the full project if it gets picked up, but of course that means the publisher would need to pay enough to satisfy his rates (which are very generous at $75, but still, apparently that's not a given in the industry). At least, he was on board last we spoke, I'd have to ask him if his schedule would still allow this.
  • There's technically a co-writer and co-owner of the IP. I came up with the story and wrote the script, but the world and most of the characters were created by someone else. We don't want a joint writing career; they're not even really a writer, this is the only IP we really want to collab on.
  • On that note, while this graphic novel works as a standalone, we still want to do more with the IP later. This was technically written as a spin-off to a larger story that doesn't lend itself very well to the graphic novel format (we were hoping for a comic/manga series, but realistically it's probably gonna end up being a series of Visual Novels).

From what I understand, the industry doesn't like any of these things.

The current plan was to eventually turn this script itself into a Visual Novel and just make it ourselves, but that'd require extensive rewriting, and I think it'd probably be a weaker version of the story than what I have currently written. There'd be a few advantages I suppose, but one of the draws of the story is you not being quite sure what's going on in the main character's head, which would be fundamentally changed in a VN. The atmospheric feel would also not quite get across. Plus, I'm not entirely sure we'll ever get around to being able to make those VN's, which is yet another reason I'd like to get this script out there - if that massive and ambitious story never materialises, at least a small piece of that universe and those characters would see the light of day.

So yeah, how screwed are we from the get-go? Is it worth a shot?

u/Gicaldo — 10 hours ago
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How to find beta / sensitivity readers? (+ images in case any of you are interested)

Me and my team are working on a mecha sci-fi VN. We're pretty far in production - sprites are done, music is maybe 2/3rds done, and we're working on some 3D-animated mech fights.

Now, we're over halfway done with draft 2 of the script, and since the midpoint is a good temporary stopping point, we wanted to get some beta readers on it. I've asked just about every friend I have who might be even remotely interested, but only one has actually read it.

And just one beta reader isn't nearly enough, especially given we tackle some very sensitive topics (re: bigotry and sexual assault) and need to make sure we're not horribly messing it up. The one beta reader who read everything has direct experience with the subject matter and she says it's fine, but we need more pairs of eyes on that.

The scripts are relatively long (200k words total, we have about 100k words ready to share right now), which makes it doubly difficult to find someone who will actually stick with it. Also, VN-scripts aren't the most riveting thing to read. My critique group is making their way through it slowly, but they're still at the start and it'd take a looong time to get through the whole thing.

So yeah, do you guys know any places where I might be able to find beta readers who would be interested in reading the whole script? If any of you are interested in giving it a shot let me know too. I'm a very experienced writer so it probably doesn't suck.

I'm adding a couple pics to the post so you can get an idea of the art style and vibe!

u/Gicaldo — 13 days ago

Need help exporting MIDIs

I’m working on a Visual Novel, and among other things I have to compose the score. I’m nowhere near a professional composer, but composing is a hobby so I’m doing a decent job at it. A friend of mine is a professional composer and sound engineer who’s mixing the tracks in Ableton (and making them sound AMAZING), but right now we’re severely limited by the fact that all I can do is export each track at a time using Garage Band’s native samples. And don’t get me wrong, those samples are WAY better than they have any right to be, but my friend has a much larger sound library that we wish we could use.

I’ve heard there’s a way to export MIDIs from a MacBook, but all I have is an iPad. So I was wondering if there’s someone here with a MacBook who’d be willing to help me out here. I’d send you the GarageBand files and you’d send the MIDI files back so my friend can swap out samples at will.

We have about 10 WIP files and it’ll be more by the time we’re done, but it’s a slow process since we’re all busy, so I’d just send you a handful of files every now and then, and you send the MIDIs back when you have time. Unfortunately I have no money to pay you with, this is a no-budget passion project, so yeah, this is just if you feel like helping me out!

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u/Gicaldo — 25 days ago