u/GooberDiver

Content warning: parental death, slight gore.

The chapter is focusing on three siblings whose father has been killed during an attack on their homestead, and introduced readers to the world and their customs before chapter 2 has them travel elsewhere to find somebody help with the funerary rites.

This is the first time in years that I've written something, so would welcome all feedback, especially around the worldbuilding, mood, prose and dialogue.

I'd like to know what kind of things grabbed your interest, if you would continue reading and what you didn't like.