College Essay Review
Would someone like to review my college personal statement?
Would someone like to review my college personal statement?
My true desire is to attend the UPENN School of Wharton and intend on applying there for E.D. I don’t have that many business awards though because I’ve been convinced I wanted to enter health care for most of high school. I now want to enter business and work to improve public health by working for a nutrition company. What are my odds for UPENN ED, UMich, Northwestern, and other Ivieis given my current resume? Is there anything I can do to boost my resume in the coming months or is it too late?
- ACT 34
- GPA: 4.0 unweighted
- 6 APs so far and have all 5s far. I plan to take 4 more next year
- Student Senate President
- NHS Secretary
- Lawn Mowing Business but not official
- Varsity XC, Powerlifting, and Track and Runner of the Year for XC
- Part-time employee at Walmart which I paired as a Youth Apprenticeship in Marketing
- 2nd in State for HOSA Epidemiology
- Interact Club
- Environmental Club
- Boys State
- Global Scholars Certificate of Achievement
I have spent the past 3 years trying to figure out what I want to do for a career so I haven’t specialized that much into business. However, in the second half of my junior year I decided I want to combine my health care knowledge with business and I am in love with some of the courses offered at UPENN School of Wharton. Are there any ways I can demonstrate my love of business over the next few months before application season that increase my odds of getting in? Any other competitions or events in general?
How accurate is the current Magoosh ACT practice test?