u/Hot_Lime_7833

honestly this might be the last I'm continuously posting after this I'm thinking of leveling up my games to make products worth saleing

im still kinda new with this thumbnail and all like this probably my 4rd and 5th time making it

how are they?

i just wanted to know what is missing in my commentry skills or am I already parfect the way I'm

honestly i just wants to get review on my commentry

like do i need to add little mirch masala in it or keeping it clean and simple would be good

currently in some shorts i keep it clean while in some i add some masala to my commentry

so I was thinking about it ,

crewheads are basically more good and better version gen 0 legend

eugine is as evil as elite but atleast he is supporting of his people

johan and jinyoung both care deeply for there family and family is the sole reason they keep on going

eli is basically tom Lee but with family to protect if you think about it both value there friends and family highly and are highly grey

Jake is the good side of gapy

and compare to them kitae and James exist because of dark side gen 0 legends

the fact that both could be the basterds son gen 0 legends already presents them as evil

they both are egoistic, idealistic (believes in there mas up ideals

kitae is a womenisr (gapy)and is kinda messed up in the mind (jinyoung)

James is ready to sacrifice anyone if it means he can achieve his goals(elite) and don't care doing bad things (tom)

daniel eos villian is gonna be either elite in pb or his pb

so I was just scrolling through reddit and saw one post of this sub

and i would like to add one more point to support it

and it's corruption and loopholes exist

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if you know how talented we Indians are at finding loopholes than caste would be the last you would be worry about

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and i bet there doctors of all caste who knows nothing about there field but simply got into the field thank to corruption

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so yeah next time you see the doctor try to know whether he became doctor thanks to corruption or hard work

i was just thinking what if reason why kitae is so mentally unstable is his mom

like from what we know is his mom most likely is not a good from the fact that she did it with a married man and that for majority of kitae childhood she would the most active parent figure in his life and one who can control him

but you can asks how can a bad mother could make him gapy obsessed monster

well one thing we know is that gapy and his gang were somewhat active his early life

and if we assumed that kitae mother was bad than she would have shown her caring side in his childhood so that gapy money could support them

and probably as a kid kitae probably used to look up to gapy

but than

Jake born , and now gapy trying to be an ideal to his main son

join politics and abandon his gang life but also his other kids

but not entirely he is not type to completely abandoned his people so he would probably provide his other kids with income but would not be active in there life from then on

and now that kitae mom doesn't need to act loving person to get gapy money since now she is getting directly with no problem

she can now show her true side ,she can now be cruel with no problems

and she also bring her boyfriends and would not have to care about kitae much

and such drastic change in life after his dad decided to join politics would probably make an image in young kitae mind about power and dominece

since From outside it would look like gapy had chosen great Good and society over him to kitae

and considering that kitae could be 8-9 he too could suffer from self esteem considering the changes in life

and around this time only he had chosen to follow a path his ideal had refused to follow

a path of carnage which he thinks gapy should have followed that way he would not try to be ideal man in society and would have not abandoned him (it a weird logic but it's just a 8-9 kid years old thinking about how things could have been good)

and after few years later kitae become increasingly strong both mentally and physically and he could have probably tried to make an name for himself in the underworld but hide the fact he is gapy son

currently i think he just wants to meet gapy after he had become somewhat successful so he could hear something like I'm proud of you i think and around this time he could have find illigal boat to Japan and mexico

but his mother constantly trying to put him in obedience would probably bad mouth him and gapy in home and could be violent also

(kitae being abused mentally and physically since childhood could build an image of his mom as some monster who he could never beat so he never try to fight her)

but one fine day abuse could be too much and she could have bad mouthed gapy too much that kitae literally snapped and killed her and after realising what had happened he would have run away trying to save himself and could have taken boat to Mexico to runaway from police and than rest could be history

both temu tom Lee is also up there

edit -since sinu is from gen 1 i would replace him with Eli