u/I_Am_Fan_Girl

As the title suggests I’d like some feedback back on my first list I’ve put together. I’d like to soon make this army and bring it into play, but would be very thankful for any feedback!

Astra Militarum Krieg (995 Points)

Astra Militarum
Hammer of the Emperor (2 Detachment Points)
Purge the Foe
Incursion (1.000 Points)

CHARACTERS

Krieg Command Squad (60 Points)
• 1x Lord Commissar
• Warlord
◦ 1x Laspistol
◦ 1x Plasma pistol
◦ 1x Power weapon
• 1x Veteran Guardsman
◦ 1x Plasma pistol
◦ 1x Power weapon
• 1x Veteran Guardsman
◦ 1x Alchemyk Counteragents
◦ 1x Close combat weapon
◦ 1x Laspistol
◦ 1x Servo-scribes
• 1x Veteran Guardsman
◦ 1x Close combat weapon
◦ 1x Lasgun
◦ 1x Master Vox
• 1x Veteran Guardsman
◦ 1x Close combat weapon
◦ 1x Lasgun
◦ 1x Regimental Standard
• 1x Veteran Guardsman
◦ 1x Close combat weapon
◦ 1x Plasma gun

BATTLELINE

Cadian Shock Troops (75 Points)
• 1x Shock Trooper Sergeant
◦ 1x Chainsword
◦ 1x Laspistol
• 9x Shock Trooper
◦ 9x Close combat weapon
◦ 9x Lasgun

Death Korps of Krieg (145 Points)
• 2x Death Korps Watchmaster
◦ 1x Boltgun
◦ 1x Close combat weapon
◦ 1x Plasma pistol
◦ 1x Power weapon
• 18x Death Korps Trooper
◦ 18x Close combat weapon
◦ 2x Death Korps Medi-pack
◦ 1x Flamer
◦ 1x Grenade launcher
◦ 14x Lasgun
◦ 1x Long-las
◦ 1x Plasma gun
◦ 2x Vox-caster

DEDICATED TRANSPORTS

Centaur RSV (65 Points)
• 1x Armoured hull
• 1x Pintle‑mounted heavy stubber

OTHER DATASHEETS

Death Riders (60 Points)
• 1x Ridemaster
◦ 1x Death Rider lascarbine
◦ 1x Frag lance
◦ 1x Power sabre
◦ 1x Savage claws
• 4x Death Rider
◦ 4x Death Rider lascarbine
◦ 4x Frag lance
◦ 4x Power sabre
◦ 4x Savage claws

Hellhound (125 Points)
• 1x Armoured tracks
• 1x Heavy flamer
• 1x Inferno cannon

Hippogriff AFV (70 Points)
• 1x Armoured hull
• 1x Melta cannon
• 1x Meltagun

Hippogriff AFV (70 Points)
• 1x Armoured hull
• 1x Heavy stubber
• 1x Melta cannon

Krieg Combat Engineers (65 Points)
• 1x Krieg Engineer Watchmaster
◦ 1x Hand flamer
◦ 1x Power weapon
• 4x Krieg Combat Engineer
◦ 1x Autopistol
◦ 4x Close combat weapon
◦ 2x Combat shotgun
◦ 1x Flamer
◦ 1x Remote Mine

Krieg Heavy Weapons Squad (75 Points)
• 3x Heavy Weapons Gunner
◦ 3x Close combat weapon
◦ 3x Krieg heavy flamer
◦ 3x Laspistol
• 1x Fire Coordinator
◦ 1x Close combat weapon
◦ 1x Laspistol

Leman Russ Battle Tank (185 Points)
• 1x Armoured tracks
• 1x Heavy flamer
• 1x Heavy stubber
• 1x Hunter-killer missile
• 1x Leman Russ battle cannon
• 2x Multi-melta

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As a new GM I sometimes stumble into situations where I’m not sure what my role in narration is. I’ll explain a few situations that happened to me GMing for a few friends who are also new to TTRPG’s.

Player: “I swing my sword and chop off his leg so he can’t run”
- Is this not a called shot and is not allowed? Or is it the players job to tell me, the GM, what he does.

Player: “I cast magic missile and beam a hole through his chest”
-again do I say what happens as a result or does the player?

Now a situation where maybe I over narrated?

Player: “I jump over him and attack with my sword”
Me(GM): “you leap over BBEG in an impressive arc and take a stab at his weapon wielding shoulder as if it was an attempt to disarm him (no pun intended)

I suppose my question is, to what extent do players narrate what’s happening in the world, not only in combat but in any encounter, and what am I responsible for narrating? Is it as simple as letting it happen? Do I re-narrate? Any advice would be wonderful.
(Using the Shadowdark rule set if that makes any difference)

Edit: Thank you guys for giving me good insight on how to handle called shots and player narration. Going forward, I’m going to ask the table that unless I explicitly say that something is a killing blow, to only tell me what they aim to do and let me narrate the results of that goal.
I appreciate everyone’s help!