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wouldu read this all the chapters ive posted no ones liked or commented so would you be interested in reading Deadly World... (blurb) A world far from the Milky Way with animals born with unuasual powers, 7 kings have ruled the whole world but they all fear as the 3rd king who has enchantments and immortality went mad now 7th King Spotswat is determine to stop this crazy king no matter how dirty or whoever he must kill to stop him. PLS SEND FEEDBACK IVE WAITED FOR SO LONG PLS.

15 years passed... Talon married a cheetah polar bear hybrid name Cholar and got 4 sons and one daughter the oldest son is Thunder a light brown cheetah with obsidian black eyes and electric powers, the second oldest is Lightning a light yellow colour and pale blue eyes with electric and ice powers, the third oldest Polar the polar bear and he can do anything he is also Talon’s faviroute son and the most

powerful of all the sons flecks of pale blue on fur enchanting powers and immortality powers and also ice

powers, then Bones a skinny eagle with a light yellow beak and NO powers and no one knows why and

Snowflake a young silver cute little polar bear with ice powers. “Sons line up!” Talon demanded.

“But father please can we not line up” Thunder begged, “it wastes time” Thunder flicked his tail back and forth.

“Fine but only if Polar agrees. What do you say Polar yes or no?” Talon asked,

“uh um for once i agree with Thunder, lets not line up” Polar replied, Thunder overflowed with rage everytime

Talon would ask Polar. “JUST BECAUSE HE HAS NICE AMAZING POWERS DOESN’T MEAN YOU ASK HIM SOMETHING

EVERY SECOND!!!” Thunder yelled, Polar’s smile grew bigger and bigger and just by looking at his smile it cut

him, “ok Thunder i think you need to drop that jealousy of yours” Polar laughed,

“Thunder stop fighting” Talon said stretching out his brown wings, Talon yawned and started eating a piece

of salmon. “I DIDNT CREATE THE FIGHT” Thunder shouted, then Cholar came, Cholar had a malar

stripe like all cheetahs and instead of black spots she had dark grey spots. “BOYS STOP FIGHTING!! Polar Grassy

is calling you” Cholar said. Polar and Lightning were the only ones who were married, Lightnings wife was

called Blaze, Blaze was a cheetah, Polar’s wife’s name is Grassy. “Hello cheetah mixed with a polar bear mother”

Polar said in a mocking voice, “Brother stop!” Thunder yelled,

“YOU STOP TALKING YOU DOMP” Polar spat, Talon, Cholar, Thunder, Lightning, Bones even Snowflake gasped

“son by law even if your a prince or princess if you swear you must be killed” Talon whispered,

“no” Polar said he picked a curved knife and started to speak “I ENCHANT THIS KNIFE SO THAT WHEN I SAY DOMP

IT WILL SLIT MOTHER AND FATHER IN THE THROAT AND CHOP THEYRE HEAD OFF” “good bye DOMPS”The knife raced after Cholar first she used her ice powers and breathed out frostbreath into the sharp knife, “I ENCHANT IT TO HAVE A SMART BRAIN LIKE A HUMAN AND NEVER MISS” Polar said giving powerto the object, the knife hit a pole until the frostbreath cracked and then chopped the head of Cholarblood sprayed out like a fountain, then the knife went after Talon, Talon used blade feathers but

the knife just split the feathers into half and cut the head of Talon. “This is a sighn if you mess with me”

Polar said glaring at Thunder, “f-father loved you” Thunder shivered in disbelief.

“YOU WHAT HAVE YOU DONE” Lightning screamed, glaring at Polar with his pale blue eyes,

“you were my faviroute brother” Silver said shaking, Bones stood up angrily his light yellow beak opened

to speak, “YOU IDIOT! YOU HAVE GONE MAD YOUR CRAZY YOUR THE MEANING OF STUPID!!” Polar frowned

“What did you say Bones? Im stupid? look whos talking!! do you know why your called Bones huh?” Polar

asked, “Uh im not sure” Bones replied, Polar laughed now he went to a table and took a blade disc and kept

it next to him, “HA!! i thought you knew oh well your called Bones cause your way to skinny to be an eagle

and he knew you’d be useless” Polar said, Bones flapped his two skinny wings frowning.

“YOU WANNA FIGHT!!!!” Bones yelled,

“I would...” Polar said brushing his white and pale blue fur. “... except you’ll die in a second” Polar chuckled.

It all happened fast but a shiny metal quickly got thrown by Polar like a frisbee, Bones flew fast his wings

spread wide but then the metal disk cut right through Bones’s left leg and blood dropped down from the

sky just like rain. “WHATS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!” Thunder screamed, Polar just stood still admiring his

ferocious claws, “I am so irritated. I ENCHANT ALL MY BROTHERS AND SISTER TO SHUT UP AND FREEZE”

Polar yawned, “Thats better now i need minions of myself, I feel like killing 1000 people today”

Polar spent hours planning out the minion once it was done polar sat down, a sword zoomed quickly

and stabbed right into polar’s heart good thing he was immortal, who did that? Whoever it was they tried

to kill me! Polar thought. WHOEVER IT WAS THEY WILL PAY.

60 YEARS LATER... Shadow married Moonlight, Wars shook around, Shadow found a baby eagle and

adopted him, and named him Talon. Shadow growled he stepped out of the palace, he’s been king for 60 years now and he’s 70, his son was getting better at fighting Shadow walked near a muddy lake.

SNAP! A blur of brown rushed passed him- SNAP! Shadow screamed a crocodile bit Shadows tail and

ripped it right off, Shadow shrieked, it was Snappy, since Shadow became king Snappy had been trying

to be king, Shadow shrieked louder trying to get the attention of one of the soldiers and one soldier heard

him, a tall kangaroo soldier came, more blood rushed out of Shadows tail. Shadow roared but to make sure

no more guards come Snappy took his claws and slit his neck and throat and bit Shadows belly and Shadow

drifted of to darkness, but the kangaroo kept fighting so Snappy bit the kangaroos leg and didn’t let go and

ripped it right off and killed the kangaroo. Snappy chuckled and ran swiftly back into the lake. 1 hour had

passed Talon and Whiptail the iguana walked near the muddy lake and found Shadows body. “Who would

be so bold to kill the king?” Talon said in anger.

“Im not sure. but wait look those arent lion bite marks or tiger bite marks those are crocodile bite marks” Whiptail pointed out his his bright light green tail flicking around. “I see if its a crocodile... i know who it

is, theres only one bad crocodile FIND SNAPPY” Whiptail walked slow and kept on watching Talon flew away

back to the palace. The trees around him started dancing and shaked to the rythm in the air. “HELLO”a cold

voice whispered around Whiptail, “ARE YOU LOOKING FOR ME” “ISN’T THAT KIND YOU BROUGHT DINNER FOR

ME DIDNT YOU I GUESS I SHOULD START EATING BEFORE MY DELICIOUS GREEN SNACK GETS COLD”

A giant emerged from the bushes well compared to tiny Whiptail the beast was way bigger. Whiptail ran

but he ran too quick so instead he ran right into Snappy’s mouth, Snappy ate him up. “NOW TIME TO

FILL MY MOUTH WITH SOME EAGLE FEATHERS” Snappy sprinted all the way to the DEADLY ARENA, and waited

for Talon. Talon flew into the arena people crowded watching to see the fight. “Its gonna be fine mother ill kill Snappy”

Talon reassured, but Moonlight was not convinsed, “That beast is gonna tear you alive” Moonlight said.

“SHES RIGHT. YOU THINK YOU CAN KILL ME YOU BALL OF FEATHERS, YOU CANT EVEN PROTECT YOURSELF”

Snappy said, “you forget my power snappy” Talon said as he stretched out his brown wings, an orb of yellow light shined in Talons white chest, then the light got brighter it was as bright as the sun most people covered they’re head. “HA HA, LIGHT DOES NOT BLIND ME” Snappy smirked. He stretched out his webbed claws ready to scratch Talon, “no Snappy my power is...” Talon flapped and flapped and the yellow light faded away “my power is... BLADE FEATHERS” Talon smiled and flapped, sharp grey feathers wen’t lose and spinned into a tornado right towards Snappy, “I CAN CONTROL SWORDS” Snappy said right the second he said that ten swords appeared and sliced all the feathers up, one silver sword raced up right to Talon trying to stab him but he dodged it and it scratched his eye leaving a red line across his eye just like his father Shadow. Talon screamed, thankfully he closed his eyes on time or more blood would of come and he would be blind. Moonlight leaped in trying to fight Snappy she bit Snappy’s tail and Snappy’s body started to fill with rage, he bit the queen on the snout and ripped it off, blood rushed out in lightning speed, mother died Talon thought,“you will pay for this” Talon roared. Snappy took a purse and took a 100 gorrel note with Shadows pictureon it and gave it to him. “Do not mock me” Talon flew and the orb of light appeared again he took hiswings and- SLICE!!! A large cut appeared on Snappy’s neck, he screamed and snapped, Talon flapped

the hardest he’d ever flapped and the light grew brighter than 1000 suns and it grew hotter and hotter

that the swords started melting, blade feathers sliced and stabbed into Snappy and the orb of light exploded

and burnt up Snappy’s body, this is my world Talon thought and i will rule the people fairly. PLS RESPOND TO THIS PLS TELL ME GIVE ME FEEDBACK I NEED IT.

whats ur top 5 fav romans... mine would be.......

1. Atticus

2. Gaius

3. Pilate

4. Julius

5. Quintus

what r urs????????

this will be chapter one chapter 2 will come out another day(CHAPTER ONE A FIGHT FOR THE CROWN) Shadow sat up and sharpened his claws his green eyes stared at the pale blue wall. Shadow

was the only land animal at ocean world his father is the king and is a brown eel with red freckles.

Shadow had no idea how he ended up in ocean world. “SHADOW!“ his father yelled.

“HURRY UP SHADOW” he yelled again.

“coming” Shadow said he leaped off the fluffy black mat and ran down the crooked hallway.

The scar down his eye seemed to hurt more then usual. “Hello Oceanslayer oh i mean father“ Shadow said. Oceanslayer was curled up on the cold floor. His face erupted into a smile,

“I was waiting for you Shadow. This world is so boring I need a NEW WORLD, now go find me a world” Oceanslayer said in delight his smile growing more menacing each time he said a word.

“FIND??!!” Shadow screamed “How can I find you a world?”

“Its simple just go in a rocket and find one see its so easy anybody with a brain can do that oh wait i forgot you dont have one” Shadow held his breath and swam to an underwater rocket and went to find a world. Oceanslayer stayed put smirking, RING! RING! Oceanslayers phone started ringing, Oceanslayer picked the phone up, IT WAS SHADOW, of course it was Shadow! “yes what” Oceanslayer said with a hint of anger in his voice. “oh um when we get there uh do i become king or no? Shadow replied nervously, “YOU ARE AN IDIOT OF COURSE IM KING!” Oceanslayer shouted,

“But father your power is imortality when will i be king?” Shadow said his voice growing colder.

“YOU WONT BE KING ILL CALL THE LAND EEL WORLD” Oeanslayer yelled again. “Wait uh too much eels are bad uh i will mix the world with sea animals and land animals ok bye im done with this boring conversation” Oceanslayer stopped the call, WHY DID I ADOPT THAT DOMP!, I should have let him drown he’s usless so when he comes back ill kill him ill mount his head on a spike

as i will ascend to my throne with no interuptions, Oceanslayer started laughing so hard a nearby soldier called tentacle came up to him, Tentacles eyes were brown and

his skin was bright red the octopus looked into oceanslayers eyes and started speaking

“oh uh um uh um oh uh” Oceanslayer got angry

“JUST SPEAK YOU BLABBERING PHSYCOPATH!” Oceanslayer screamed

“umm its uh just whats so funny” Tentacle said his tentacles shaking.

“NOTHING YOU IDIOT SQUID!!!” Oceanslayer roared

“Uh my king umm im an octopus” he said. Oceanslayers face filled with rage.

“OCTOPUS SQUID! SAME THING!” Oceanslayer yelled.

“uh not really Oceanslayer, Squids are larger.” he pointed out.

“THATS KING TO YOU CALL ME KING! AND ALSO WHO ASKED YOU” Oceanslayer spat.

MEANWHILE IN THE ROCKET...

Seaweed was the fastest rocket driver Shadow knew. Shadow put his scroll about a planet called EARTH

away, and glanced out the round window, it was a mega planet! It was huge Shadow had read about these

half of the planet is as big as an average planet, “Land there Seaweed” Shadow said calmly

“but my prince look” Seaweed pointed with his fin at four blackholes surrounding one half of the mega

planet. “oh well guess what i dont like that half it has a mini heart shaped island, i mean i have shadow powers and resisting blackholes power so i guess-” Shadow smirked shadow pressed the self destruct

button and jumped out floating in the air, Shadow held his breath “so long sucker” Shadow laughed Seaweed jumped off too the rocket exploded behind them, but seaweed forgot about the blackhole

and he screamed in terror as the blackhole devoured him. Shadow knew black panthers could land on their feet but he couldnt land on his feet from this height so he held onto a piece of the destructed rocket it took forever when he was finally close he couldnt breath anymore so shadow passed out and slipped

he fell into the largest island and hit his head on soft grass his black fur rested on tiny rock pieces,

several minutes later he finally woke up, Oceanslayer was calling on his phone, Shadow didnt like Oceanslayer it was no secret Oceanslayer didnt like him either, “HAVE YOU FOUND A WORLD!” Oceanslayer

screamed, “yes ill send the location” Shadow said calmly,

“GOOD CAUSE ILL BE WAITING FOR MY THRONE AND MY CROWN AND MY WORLD” Oceanslayer said,

No father this is my throne my crown and MY WORLD. Oceanslayers powers are swimming in air like all

fish and immortality if Oceanslayer becomes king he’ll be king forever! No ill take care of him ill finish him i cant kill him BUT maybe i can bury him, Hours passed and finally Oceanslayer was here.

He came with lots of animals there was more than 90000 Million! “Crown me king here Shadow ill call this

world uhhh ah ha OCEANSLAYER WORLD!” Oceanslayer chuckled “too bad for you Shadow, HA HA youll never be good Shadow face it no one will except you, YOU WILL NEVER BELONG ANYWHERE” Oceanslayer

laughed, Shadow roared he leaped onto oceanslayer and scratched him under his fin blood shot out quickly, “HIDE YOURSELF IN A SEWER YOU UGLY SLIMY DOMP” Shadow exclaimed, people in the crowd started gasping because he said DOMP, DOMP was the swear word for most planets in this galaxy the galaxys name is WAY MILKY, “WHO HAS DIRT POWERS?” Shadow said in a sharp voice,

A female grey wolf with flecks of some dark pastel yellow on her legs and snout stepped out of the crowd and said in a shaky voice “um my name is Moonlight and i have dirt powers”

“Good, BURY OCEANSLAYER” Shadow said in fury, Oceanslayer looked at him in disbelief

“YOU ARE THE MOST DISSAPOINTING SON A FATHER COULD EVER HAVE, YOU WILL REGRE-” Oceanslayer

yelled so loud his lungs could fall off but the dirt pile drowned his voice and drowned him as well so much dirt was piled up it was a mountain a weak mountain but Shadow believed in time it would be as sturdy as iron, Tentacle took the gold crown and placed it on Shadows head, Shadow smiled “TODAY I CALL THIS ISLAND SNOWY ISLAND THERE WILL BE ONE KING TO RULE ALL THE ISLANDS BUT THE KINGS WILL LIVE HERE AND TODAY I CALL THIS HALF OF THE WORLD DEADLY WORLD!!!!!!! (hope u enjoyed chapter 2 comes out this week) please comment what i should improve or comment anything please i really need feedback

its crazy how S6 is one day i know its in the bible but its still crazy for me.

Not good quality but its still super sad :(