Feedback on my rap
Hi, I've been writing and rapping just for fun for a few years, but now I really want to rap over my own tracks and music. This all I've recorded and written until now: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qebEzQB8TfLAX3DNC5TMoa8I1sqnjQTw/view?usp=sharing
Anything that can help me improve is appreciated. Things that are going well and I need to keep doing would be handy to know too.
I have recorded it with my laptop microphone, so the sound quality is bad, I already know that. I also haven't done any mixing or mastering, that's not what I have questions about.
The song is about domestic violence, so that's the context in which the lyrics are written