u/Longjumping_Yak_3671

Hello r/writewithme.

I need a partner with good prose, good dialogue, and good subtext-making to help me with a fantasy adventure novel

Said person can partner with me on their own personal schedule and terms; it's a light premise and novel too, nothing too complicated or deep, but very noncontradictory.

We can DM here since I forgot my discord account's password.

For me, there are a lot due to my being a math and physics nerd and my love for spectacles, but in my first novel's first chapter, the ships used by the villain and hero are so fast they outspeed each other's attacks, and said attacks can expand space between them till it's 9.87e10^1,000,000 light-years, and they can hit each other with sheer speed in a single planck instant.
And BTW, these feats are related to the themes of the story, not just overpoweredness for the sake of it.

Middle grade reading level.

Genres: Science fantasy, metafiction, realistic fiction

Goals/expectations/commitment: finishing the first few chapters.

Experience level: Any, preferably simple and whimsical level.

Meeting place: online, preferably here on Reddit.

Premise: We follow two worlds, one a realistic one where Rawy wants to grow up and be the highest best seller in the century, and he succeeds, but he becomes depressed along the way; he must narrate his works to a bunch who never heard them before in order to regain his love for storytelling and art, and he remembers that his children never allowed his grandchildren to read his novels due to issues they had growing up, and he chooses to narrate to his grandchildren and solve his shaky relationship with his family along the way.

the other, the realm of the novels themselves, how they start as simple passion and delve into something bigger as they get more fans and adoration; he wrote and published his first work as a ten-year-old, and it got both good criticism and mass appeal. he went to expand his world into a more complex and deeper world till he got old and retired; we follow these novels as they transform from simple and hollow to complex and deep.

Middle grade reading level.

Genres: Science fantasy, metafiction, realistic fiction.

• Goals/expectations/commitment: at least to finish my first five chapters
• Writing/experience level: Any
• Meeting place: Online.

Premise: We follow two worlds, one a realistic one where Rawy wants to grow up and be the highest best seller in the century, and he succeeds, but he becomes depressed along the way; he must narrate his works to a bunch who never heard them before in order to regain his love for storytelling and art, and he remembers that his children never allowed his grandchildren to read his novels due to issues they had growing up, and he chooses to narrate to his grandchildren and solve his shaky relationship with his family along the way.

the other, the realm of the novels themselves, how they start as simple passion and delve into something bigger as they get more fans and adoration; he wrote and published his first work as a ten-year-old, and it got both good criticism and mass appeal. he went to expand his world into a more complex and deeper world till he got old and retired; we follow these novels as they transform from simple and hollow to complex and deep.

Genres: Fantasy, science fiction, dramedy, YA.

High school reading level.

Premise: Inspired by the story of Moses, a tyrant rules for a very long time; he ruled when it was bronze and swords. Now he still rules; when they made space travel, he always got daughters, but he desired a boy, so he decided to adopt. Unbeknownst to him and a few others, the boy he adopts happens to be the chosen one destined to defeat him when he grows up.

Apart from Top Gun, Titanic, Indiana Jones, The Shining, Saturday Night Fever, The Terminal, Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back, Planet of the Apes, Mad Max, Armageddon, and Stand by Me, of course.

Tolkien, Asimov, Herbert, Sanderson, Erikson, and Jordan—you all know them, and I love and respect their works, yet I always wondered how they make them so good, which I learned is a matter of depth and complexity. So how do worlds become complex, and how do they become deep? And how can a deep world be simple and a complex world be shallow? And how to achieve both?