If you were the writer, how would you connect the religious elements into the plot, considering the title?

I heard that fans were disappointed that there was no religion (Christianity if I'm not mistaken) despite being called "Project: Eden's Garden", so I'm curious how you handled this.

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 11 days ago

Hey, this is a fangan audio-drama, right? So...

What would it be like TRANSCRIPT EPISODE when Haruka and Monomoko fused and got defeated by the "power of friendship" if WHITE really happened?! Seriously? Doesn't a stupid scenario like that actually require visuals?

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 15 days ago

Is it odd that I think the real reason Gooseworx didn't hire anyone to help her write TADC was so that no one would criticize her writing an abuser who killed herself because she was trans?

Considering that TADC actually has a lot of dangerous messages if we think about it again, Goose really wanted to tell her version of events in writing about someone who has difficulty opening up about her transness, in the wrong way.

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

To the "Chainsaw Man" and "Devilman Crybaby" fandoms: If "in the pool" and "Crybaby" were swapped, would the context of THAT SCENE still magically fit??

Since both soundtracks were composed by Kensuke Ushio and depict the characters feeling "something"... soooo...

Trying out some experiment ✌️

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

Regarding episode 6, wouldn't it make more sense if the one who said "Stop looking..." was... I don't know- POMNI?!

Imagine your greatest fear is being forgotten and alone. Chances are, no one will miss you when you're gone. Then, the person you consider your partner will forget you when you die.

I mean yeah, Pomni knew Jax was lying and pretended not to care, but wouldn't it make sense if she showed her anger issues overflowing at her after hearing her crashout speech?! At this moment, Pomni could give clues about the people closest to her in the real world, like "You know what?! You're RIGHT! I'M JUST A PLAYTHING!! No matter HOOOOOW HARD I try to connect and empathize with someone, I still feel like I don't belong! NOBODY WILL miss me!! So please, if you really don't consider me a friend, then stop... looking..."

Pomni saying something like that would make sense why Jax had a panic attack, realizing he had gone too far, and not wanting to lose her like he lost Ribbit to her actions. The difficulty in apologizing and thinking it's too late would make sense why he didn't ask Pomni for help and abstracted (if the show said he had to).

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

How would you rewrite Haruka's motive as the mastermind and her contract with Monomoko?

The things that motivated me were: First, I wanted to dive deeper into this post. Second, I had seen the Project Eden's Garden lore document regarding the mastermind's motives. Honestly, >!"Wanting to prove the parasitic organization whether the Ultimates are selfish or not"!< is a much better motive than >!"Wanting to prove that humanity is cruel and fusing with an eldritch being to gain immortality,"!< and "better" here isn't exactly the best.

>!We know Haruka craves the immortality offered by Monomoko, but we don't know WHYYY she wants it so badly. What is the benefit for her? Does she want to be worshipped for having superpowers? Does she want to study the world until the end of time?! And why does she want the other two department heads, whose names I can't be bothered to mention, included in her contract?!<

In my opinion, Project Eden's Garden is at least reasonable compared to whatever Tetro is attempting regarding the mastermind.

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

I created the character design for Fujioka Itoki, and I'm glad he doesn't have an AI design

His color palette features purple for his outfit, with a gradient of dark blue to light green for his hair. I want to give him a personality that is calm, responsible and intelligent, yet playful and actively inquisitive. Initially, I wanted to portray his as someone suffering from cancer or appendicitis, but I didn't want to add to the list of people with disabilities who must endure suffering. He still has shortcomings, such as his desire to investigate unique things and his struggle to feel accepted in his environment.

At least, Hisae got to reunite with her husband. Good for you, Hisa!

u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago
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"TADC isn't a misogynistic show, the majority of the cast are female"

So what the fuck is this?

EDIT: Okay, to be fair! The fact that a female character isn't referred to by name throughout the entire show isn't 100% proof of misogyny. But my point still stands when you look at how the show treats Ragatha vs Jax (who is referred to as "he/him" the whole time).

u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

The dynamic of the relationship I needed, but never materialized

"18 STUDENT DEATHS! You didn't wanna leave them a chance, huh?! Did you feel anger? HATE?! They were terrified, BEGGING you for mercy! But you destroyed them, again, and again, AND AGAIN!"

Okay. aside the joke, after seeing just how critical the situations facing both the students and the scientists were, I was surprised and puzzled as to why the doctor among the students didn't interact with Monomoko (that would have actually helped shape their characters, rather than simply triggering anxiety for the sake of it).

Despite being one of the smartest and most rational characters, Hirose experiences intense emotions; he is sensitive and doesn't want anxiety to control him. Monomoko wants to learn about humanity (while that’s a fine motive for a "kit" like her, I hate how it was executed) and she wants to be seen as a significant figure rather than just the host of a killing game. The trouble is, aside from Maekawa, who respects her, no one really takes her emotions into account.

Having a doctor who delved deeper into understanding an eldritch horror, having the courage to call out her terrible actions in order to teach her to be a better person, even knowing it would break him, would be truly compelling.

A simple example: In the episode [Maekawa’s Morning Tonight Show in the Morning: Episode Two], Monomoko steals candy from a vending machine elsewhere, and Maekawa laughs while praising her. If it were Hirose, he would certainly tell her to return the candy. Yet, if one were to ask, "Between Maekawa and Hirose, who has the healthier relationship with Monomoko?", it would spark differing perspectives, both for Monomoko and for the audience.

If you're asking about the reference for the joke, it's from Detroit: Become Human.

u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

I want Jax alive so I can see if Caine giving his role to the cast is the main reason their circus life got better or not

Because I found a fandom that said "They got their happy ending not because Jax was abstracted, but Caine learned to get along with the cast and give them free control" or something like that.

But... ISN'T A PIECE OF A SHIT GONE, IT'S ONE OF THE REASONS?!

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

I want Jax alive so I can see if Caine giving his role to the cast is the main reason their circus life got better or not

Because I found a fandom that said "They got their happy ending not because Jax was abstracted, but Caine learned to get along with the cast and give them free control" or something like that.

But... ISN'T A PIECE OF A SHIT GONE, IT'S ONE OF THE REASONS?!

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 1 month ago

If Pomni had highlighted her anger issue more in the show, would her attachment to Jax have made sense?

If "one character" is very angry at "other character," then the "other character" has done something very bad to "one character" or to the characters they cares about, and the "other character" has to take responsibility for what they did. Usually that's how it is on other shows.

If this "other character" is Jax, could this work?

Because usually someone who has anger issues is considered the same as a jerk, so I think one reason she understands Jax is because she feels like she finally belongs to someone who emphasizes negative traits more.

And remember, "made sense" here doesn't mean I'm excusing Pomni for sympathizing with Jax or defending her actions, I just want the seeds of their relationship to be made clear!

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 2 months ago

FINISHED! 16/16 Pinklings' Redesign (Gacha Life 2)

Main inspiration: laugtherhyena, bluethetalkingcattimes2, dx-esh, and kiaramemes09 (Tumblr)

Student 9 - Shimazaki Homare

Meaning of the name:

  • "Shimazaki" : A headland or the tip of an island's landmass that projects into the sea
  • "Homare" : Pride, honor, or glory

Details of the redesign:

  • Making her mask more fox-like. Thanks, u/Artistic_Joie
  • On her mask, there is a sun motif, a foil of Hoshizora's moon motif
  • I want to give her the colors that represent the sun, like yellow, orange, and red
  • She is draping her coat over her shoulders, so I made the blazer a dark color to create a contrast
  • She made the buckle and those furry shoes herself
  • The tiara given by Natsume

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Student 15 - Natsume Hiroko

Meaning of the name:

  • "Natsume" : Summer eyes
  • "Hiroko" : A generous, tolerant, and big-hearted child

Details of the redesign:

  • Her goddamn curly hair!
  • Changing her eyes from red to orange
  • I want her outfit to look like a dancer's outfit, especially when she takes off her coat
  • Adding blue accents, keeping the blue flame in mind
  • Adding a touch of blue and purple for the gradient on her leg accessories
  • Adding stars to her socks
  • The mask given by Shimazaki
u/Low-Committee4785 — 2 months ago
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What was the most harmful messaging in this show?

There's a bunch like sympathizing for people who are terrible or the amount of people pleasing being portrayed as a good thing but what is the worst of it?

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u/Low-Committee4785 — 2 months ago

14/16 Pinklings' Redesign (Gacha Life 2)

Main inspiration: laugtherhyena, bluethetalkingcattimes2, dx-esh, and kiaramemes09 (Tumblr)

Student 8 - Aoyagi Saku

Meaning of the name:

  • "Aoyagi" : The blue willow tree
  • "Saku" : A new start or a creative scheme

Details of the redesign:

  • I like how laugtherhyena draws his hairstyle, so I adopted that
  • He was supposed to have colorful hair clips, but he gave them to Koyama, a person who trusted him
  • His eyes remained heterochromatic, but the light blue one was changed to aqua
  • A sketchbook given by his brother to capture what he daydreams about
  • Those spots are from him picking at his skin
  • An orange ribbon on his sleeveless cardigan; orange is his favorite color
  • A patterned tie given by one of the children's parents
  • A VERY colorful apron
  • Adding mixed-pattern socks
  • The bracelet matching with Hiroshige

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Student 12 - Hiroshige Kanemaru

Meaning of the name:

  • "Hiroshige" : Extensive grandeur or multi-layered prosperity
  • "Kanemaru" : The golden circle or perfect wealth

Details of the redesign:

  • Making his hair more messy stylish, from brown to cream
  • Giving him a darker skin tone, like sand
  • kiaramemes09 made a really cool outfit for him, so I modified it a little bit, like giving it a gold color
  • At first, I didn't want to give him lazy eyes, but I have a friend who has them, so I decided to go with it to appreciate him
  • Eye bags caused by his drug addiction
  • The bracelet matching with Aoyagi
  • The hair clips matching with Moriyama, the person he trusts
u/Low-Committee4785 — 2 months ago

Fun Fact: The abstraction is the only way for Jax to "tell" her backstory and Ribbit

Actually, another way to make that happen is by bringing Ribbit back, which is impossible. It's worth noting that Ribbit, a character who's been constantly brought up since episode 5, only really appears in the final episode. And the only reason that happens is because Pomni entered Jax's abstraction mind. Why? Because Jax is a hardcore anti-disclosure person who only becomes vulnerable after abstraction.

In episode 5, Ragatha mentioned that he has no friends anymore and Ribbit's door was first shown during Intermission Time. In episode 6, Ragatha suspected Jax of corrupting Pomni, her dissociation when he saw the Ribbit sticker crossed out, and her and Pomni's fight. In episode 7, Jax nearly abstracted while sleeping and seeing figures of her best friends, Ragatha also mentioned Ribbit's name during Abel's mission (OH RIGHT! SHE DID!). In episode 8, Jax and her hot chocolate—though that was all, but there was a big connection between them. And FINALLY, in the final episode, Ribbit (and Kaufmo) actually appeared!

The show keeps dragging out Jax's personal issues and backstory until the very end. Ribbit is the abstracted character who gets the most attention, even more than Queenie. Yet, Gooseworx only provided glimpses of them on social media, leading some fans to portray them as a funny and jerk prankster who still cared about people, or someone who physically and mentally abused Jax before she was abstracted. We were thinking, just because he remembers Ribbit through Pomni, doesn't mean their personalities and motives are 90% the same.

I’m convinced there are other ways for us, the audience, to learn more about Jax and Ribbit, beyond just her abstract mind. Here are a few examples:

  • The conversation between Ragatha and Pomni after the awards show. That was the perfect moment for Ragatha to talk about her closest friend besides Kaufmo. She became increasingly worried about Pomni after learning about the fight and could have shared details about her relationship with Jax.
  • Have Pomni explore Jax’s room. If she truly wants to understand Jax, she shouldn't just wait for her to open up (since he won't); she needs to take initiative. While Jax is away, Pomni could go inside, find photos from when the trio was still alive, and decide to explore her friends' rooms as well.
  • This is a bit of a side note, but if Pomni were to save Jax from abstraction (again, but harder), I'm 500% certain the TADC ending would be less controversial. If Jax had a heart-to-heart with Pomni about what he did to Ribbit after she saved her, that would mark real progress for her. If he wasn't abstract, he wouldn't be let off the hook; Instead, Pomni would be allowed to feel disappointed and disgusted that he projected her pain onto someone who cared about her and abused them to the point of committing suicide, simply because of her traumatic backstory. Ribbit actually matters more if Jax chooses to take responsibility, and that is what they want: to feel remembered by the people they care about.
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u/Low-Committee4785 — 2 months ago

If this were Evil Jax, I'd agree. But this isn't it.

Maybe I would agree if Jax existed in an alternate universe where he'd become transsexual. But some of the comics I've seen show Jax still being a jerk even though he's a woman, and I can see that happening.

So what's the point?

u/Low-Committee4785 — 2 months ago