u/MooseLips_SinkShips

Based on the feedback regarding the previous pictorial style, I scrapped the old version and started over with a focus on high contrast, thoughtful use of positive/negative space and increased accuracy of the story elements. I added in the tugboat, but bigger than it is in the original, which is why I added more height to the ocean liner as it needed to feel more dramatic in contrast.

Though the water ripples look too wide now, but I don't want to export it again.

There is still a matter of determining just what is achievable for the medium. Some details may need further refinement or simplification in order to work. That is the step for later.

My tattoo artist offered a barter of a free tattoo for a favour I am doing for him. So I tried to find something low stress, and respectful of his time. L'Atlantique is a personal favourite so I distilled that down into a minimal logo-esque type of mark. Is everything working or does it need some tweaking?