u/MyAJMAKER

Read the Script (PDF):https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FcX-ShviVeXweQbeeFcaCh4rN8dDsujr/view?usp=sharing

Format: Animated Comedy (12 Pages)

Tone: Dexter's Laboratory meets South Park / Sci-Fi Chaos Comedy

Logline:

When a brilliant 5-year-old’s makeshift time machine backfires, it turns every kid in town into an adult—and every adult into a chaotic, diaper-bound toddler. With full-grown bodies, permanent genius updates, and a talking ferret on their side, the kids have 24 hours to override the local power grid before the shift becomes permanent.

Why I’m Sharing:

Hey everyone! I’m putting out the pilot episode for **"Pinner Road Prodigies: The Puberty Glitch."**It’s a fast-paced, high-concept animated pilot featuring dynamic kid characters, adult-level stakes, and plenty of absurd sci-fi comedy.

I’d love to get some fresh eyes on the script. If you have a few minutes for a table-read, I’d specifically appreciate feedback on:

1. Pacing & Energy: Does the act progression hold momentum from the explosion to the power plant break-in?
2. Dialogue: Does the banter land well between kids operating in adult bodies?
3. Character Beats: Does each member of the Prodigies unit feel distinct and memorable?

Drop your thoughts or critiques in the comments below—all constructive feedback is greatly appreciated! Enjoy the read!

Thank you for your time!

Aj Maker

Read the Script (PDF):https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FcX-ShviVeXweQbeeFcaCh4rN8dDsujr/view?usp=sharing

Format: Animated Comedy (12 Pages)

Tone: Dexter's Laboratory meets South Park / Sci-Fi Chaos Comedy

Logline:

When a brilliant 5-year-old’s makeshift time machine backfires, it turns every kid in town into an adult—and every adult into a chaotic, diaper-bound toddler. With full-grown bodies, permanent genius updates, and a talking ferret on their side, the kids have 24 hours to override the local power grid before the shift becomes permanent.

Why I’m Sharing:

Hey everyone! I’m putting out the pilot episode for **"Pinner Road Prodigies: The Puberty Glitch."**It’s a fast-paced, high-concept animated pilot featuring dynamic kid characters, adult-level stakes, and plenty of absurd sci-fi comedy.

I’d love to get some fresh eyes on the script. If you have a few minutes for a table-read, I’d specifically appreciate feedback on:

1. Pacing & Energy: Does the act progression hold momentum from the explosion to the power plant break-in?
2. Dialogue: Does the banter land well between kids operating in adult bodies?
3. Character Beats: Does each member of the Prodigies unit feel distinct and memorable?

Drop your thoughts or critiques in the comments below—all constructive feedback is greatly appreciated! Enjoy the read!

Thank you for your time!

Aj Maker

Hey everyone!

Thanks for all the support on the pilot episode of Pinnerroadprodigies.com. While Episode 1 was the high-concept kickoff that brought our core crew of Prodigies together, Episode 2 opens up the world and introduces you to the rest of the cast!

In this episode, we dive deeper into the home lives, unique family dynamics, and hilarious backgrounds of the neighborhood. You'll get to meet some of the wild personalities that make this town tick as the fallout from the pilot continues.

Read Episode 2 Here: https://www.pinnerroadprodigies.com/episode-one-spec-script/episode-2

What’s Next for the Series: This is just the beginning—we have so many stories coming down the pipeline:

• Episode 3 is currently in the works and is going to be an absolute blast.
• Episodes 4 through 6 escalate the stakes into a full multi-episode arc that takes the Prodigies way beyond Pinner Road!

Give it a read, and let me know your thoughts, favorite moments, or character interactions in the comments below. Feedback is always welcome!

— Anthony Santillo Jr.

#VoiceActing #Animation #CharacterDesign #IndieCreator #Screenplay #SciFiComedy #PennersRoadProdigies #Screenwriting #Scriptwriting #IndieAnimation #AnimatedSeries

Read the Script (PDF):https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FcX-ShviVeXweQbeeFcaCh4rN8dDsujr/view?usp=sharing

Format: Animated Comedy (12 Pages)

Tone: Dexter's Laboratory meets South Park / Sci-Fi Chaos Comedy

Logline:

When a brilliant 5-year-old’s makeshift time machine backfires, it turns every kid in town into an adult—and every adult into a chaotic, diaper-bound toddler. With full-grown bodies, permanent genius updates, and a talking ferret on their side, the kids have 24 hours to override the local power grid before the shift becomes permanent.

Why I’m Sharing:

Hey everyone! I’m putting out the pilot episode for **"Pinner Road Prodigies: The Puberty Glitch."**It’s a fast-paced, high-concept animated pilot featuring dynamic kid characters, adult-level stakes, and plenty of absurd sci-fi comedy.

I’d love to get some fresh eyes on the script. If you have a few minutes for a table-read, I’d specifically appreciate feedback on:

1. Pacing & Energy: Does the act progression hold momentum from the explosion to the power plant break-in?
2. Dialogue: Does the banter land well between kids operating in adult bodies?
3. Character Beats: Does each member of the Prodigies unit feel distinct and memorable?

Drop your thoughts or critiques in the comments below—all constructive feedback is greatly appreciated! Enjoy the read!

Thank you for your time!

Aj Maker

Hey everyone!

New to the sub and excited to connect with other writers. I’ve been deep in the development phase for an original animated series titled Pinner Road Prodigies.

We’ve been mapping out script drafts, pilot episodes, character bibles, and multi-generational family dynamics. We just launched our official site to host the world and character lineup.

As a writer, I’d love to get feedback from fellow screenwriters and storytellers on the premise, character setups, and dynamic relationships we're building.

Check out the main hub and character roster here:

🔗https://www.pinnerroadprodigies.com

(If you click "Meet the Characters" in the top right-hand corner, you can view the full character lineup and bios!)

Would love to hear your honest thoughts, critiques, or notes on the character concepts. Thanks for taking a look!