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(For those with short attention spans, vocals / verse begin at around 39 seconds and the part I’m asking for advice on mainly, begins around 2:54)

Hello all,

as the title says, I’m looking for feedback and some ideas for the finale of the song. After the guitar solo/ buildup the song currently moves into the original bass motif from the start of the song, I would like that to lead into something explosive and have the song end on that note.

I am pulling heavy inspiration from Sabbath and Zeppelin , so far my creative well has run dry and my musical prowess (or lack thereof) prevents me from stealing any cool ideas from the two aforementioned bands.

Any feedback on the general mood and direction of the song would be just as greatly appreciated as it may help steer me in the direction of a completed song.

Thanks so much!

(Excuse the mixing and occasionally flat singing, this is a draft)

Hey all,

I'm a local resident working on building a startup that addresses a specific frustration that my fiancé and I have constantly run into while living in an apartment where storage space is at a premium (I'm sure plenty of other renters here can relate).

Normally, my instinct would be to just launch the service and validate demand as I go. However, because this specific venture requires a significant amount of upfront capital, I'm conducting some quick market research first to ensure there is a real demand among local Charlotte renters before pulling the trigger.

The survey is completely anonymous, entirely multiple-choice, and takes less than 2 minutes. Looking for your honest habits and feedback:

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSctJkRBmw6ter1E78ie69ruI_Tf5GBkBZ32yzXVChJCbdEZTA/viewform?usp=header

I would massively appreciate your help and insights! Thanks a ton.