u/Nymfunny

Asked for feedback here a couple weeks back, here are the adjustments! Is it an improvement?

Mostly trying to address the fact that people couldn't tell he was a dragon hunter from looking at him, so most of the big changes were communicating that.

u/Nymfunny — 3 days ago

General idea is hes a dragon who hunts other dragons.

Feel like he could be a lot more interesting or maybe i've gone in the wrong direction idk

u/Nymfunny — 21 days ago