u/Only-Arugula1449

​I’ve just finished my very first ambient track, using electric guitar, bass, field recordings, waveform manipulation and a old Korg Ax3g.

I am looking for honest feedback on the composition and sound design. I want to know exactly what works, what feels disjointed, and where the mix fails.

I’m here to improve, so please be as critical as necessary.

Thank you

Just tell me which one would you choose and why.

Thanks :)