

Just a little note of progress
Hi there!
I’m new here, and to writing in general. I got an idea for a novel something like last April or May, and got right to work and found that I love crafting stories and little worlds.
I just wanted to show how much progress I’ve been able to make in only a year; the full novel drafts this far have averaged out to around 70k words each time, and I’m on my fifth draft here. I’ve been really practicing sentence structure and how to present info lately; I’m imagining how I can guide a reader’s perception through the same info in different ways. I posted two pictures here: the first is my first attempt at introducing a character toward the beginning of my novel; it’s one of the first things I ever wrote. The second is that same scene in its fifth draft; I’ve edited to vary sentence length and structure a lot, and I’ve paid specific attention to the order I present info. Physicality, opening up into a grander setting, and then psychological in the first paragraph.
I find it very interesting to see how it all really works and how actual authors tailor their language to not just portray info but guide perception. I wonder where I might be in another year, or a decade, or more.
Thanks!