u/Playful-Koala-4129

I'm writing a fanfic featuring a murder where the firearm used belongs to the Port Mafia. The problem is, I don't know what type or model the Port Mafia uses (I honestly don't know anything about guns). I looked into it and found that, because gun control in Japan is so strict, the mafia there doesn't have many firearms at its disposal—mostly Tokarevs and Makarovs—but the Port Mafia doesn't seem to face that availability issue. I’d really appreciate it if someone could help me out.

It's around 1500 words long and is mostly just dialogue between two characters. I decided to reread it and I'm left with a few questions. I'd like to know if it lacks description? Is it too cheesy in some parts? Does the dialogue work on its own? Thanks in advance to anyone who can answer my questions.

I'm writing a fanfic in which Hachigou, in her teens about two hundred years after the events of TyBW, is one of the characters. I've already more or less defined her personality, but I don't want to overlook any potential traits of her. So it would help me if you commented on how you think her character would be grown up after the end of Bleach.