u/RevolutionaryAge1008

▲ 10 r/ProgressionFantasy+1 crossposts

Writer with some free time on his hands offers to review your work.

Hello! As the the title says I got some time on my hands and I want to help the community out. I know how hard it is to get a good review, if you dont have firends to look at your work. And when you do find some help from the internet, it is a bunch of AI reviews.

So here I am, offering my eyeballs for your pleasure. Anyone who needs their work looked at can DM me.

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u/RevolutionaryAge1008 — 12 hours ago

[In progress] [19k] [Litrpg] Title: Die Hard Dan. This noob reqests feed back from the good people of reddit.

HI! as the title says I am starting out as an author. I need some beta readers before i release my work on RR. Unfortunatly, I don't really have friends I trust to show my work to just yet. So I turn to you guys for help. We can even trade, like i read your chapters tell you what I think, while you do the same for me. And if you don't have the time, maybe you can recommend a place where i can find people that could help? DM me if you're willing to help out.

Tnx!

and here is a little blurb on what to expect.

Dan has nothing—except his sister.

With a face that won’t move, a stutter that betrays him, and a hyper senetive sense of smell, he’s spent his life being beaten down. But none of that matters. Not when Cece is hungry. Not when she’s sick. Not when she needs him.

“Welcome, contestant. To the pitstop on your journey to eternal damnation. Strive to entertain, survial is optional,”

Dan needs to survive 30 days. Meet a god. and make a wish.

Because somewhere out there—

His sister is waiting.

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u/RevolutionaryAge1008 — 10 days ago
▲ 2 r/fantasywriters+1 crossposts

Friendless writer needs help reviewing the first few chaps of his book

HI! as the title says I am starting out as an author. I need some beta readers before i release my work on RR. Unfortunatly, I don't really have friends I trust to show my work to just yet. So I turn to you guys for help. We can even trade, like i read your chapters tell you what I think, while you do the same for me. And if you don't have the time, maybe you can recommend a place where i can find people that could help?

Tnx!

Dan has nothing—except his sister.

With a face that won’t move, a stutter that betrays him, and a hyper senetive sense of smell, he’s spent his life being beaten down. But none of that matters. Not when Cece is hungry. Not when she’s sick. Not when she needs him.

“Welcome, contestant. To the pitstop on your journey to eternal damnation. Strive to entertain, survial is optional,”

Dan needs to survive 30 days. Meet a god. and make a wish.

Because somewhere out there—

His sister is waiting.

here is the link any help would be greatly aappreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fzoCEyLH8j17pRp3YT1eyaz-CvT1kP0C0HRDqsfonWE/edit?usp=drivesdk

u/RevolutionaryAge1008 — 10 days ago

Critique the first four chapters of my Novel, Die Hard Dan [Litrpg, 6000 words]

HI! as the title says I am starting out as an author. I need some beta readers before i release my work on RR. Unfortunatly, I don't really have friends I trust to show my work to just yet. So I turn to you guys for help. We can even trade, like i read your chapters tell you what I think, while you do the same for me. And if you don't have the time, maybe you can recommend a place where i can find people that could help? Tnx! Dan has nothing—except his sister. With a face that won’t move, a stutter that betrays him, and a hyper senetive sense of smell, he’s spent his life being beaten down. But none of that matters. Not when Cece is hungry. Not when she’s sick. Not when she needs him. “Welcome, contestant. To the pitstop on your journey to eternal damnation. Strive to entertain, survial is optional,” Dan needs to survive 30 days. Meet a god. and make a wish. Because somewhere out there— His sister is waiting. here is the link any help would be greatly appreciated

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fzoCEyLH8j17pRp3YT1eyaz-CvT1kP0C0HRDqsfonWE/edit?usp=sharing

u/RevolutionaryAge1008 — 12 days ago
▲ 23 r/royalroad+4 crossposts

Friendless dummy requests help reviewing the first two chapters of his book.

HI! as the title says I am starting out as an author. I need some beta readers before i release my work on RR. Unfortunatly, I don't really have friends I trust to show my work to just yet. So I turn to you guys for help. We can even trade, like i read your chapters tell you what I think, while you do the same for me. And if you don't have the time, maybe you can recommend a place where i can find people that could help?

Tnx!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fzoCEyLH8j17pRp3YT1eyaz-CvT1kP0C0HRDqsfonWE/edit?usp=sharing

Edit: I've added a few more chapters, feel free to ignore those if you want to. just thought two chapters wont be enough to provide anything of susbstance.

u/RevolutionaryAge1008 — 12 days ago