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Day 7: I know. She’s already Busted but if you had to How would YOOOUU?! Yes YOU! Upgrade Polarity?

mechanics

utility

power

writing

etc.

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 17 hours ago
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My Personal Adam Taurus Rewrite

Adam was born into the Schnee Dust Company’s Faunus labor system alongside his parents, forced to work dangerous mining operations under brutal conditions. The mines were all he knew growing up: collapsing tunnels, exhausted workers, overseers who treated Faunus lives as disposable. But despite all of it, Adam’s parents tried to give him something hopeful. After shifts, they would tell him stories about heroes. 

warriors who protected the weak, people strong enough to stand against monsters. Those stories mattered to Adam because they taught him strength could mean protection instead of cruelty.

Then his parents died in a mining collapse. And the company replaced them the next day.

That was the first lesson Adam learned about the world; Some people suffer so quietly that nobody notices when they disappear. As Adam grew older, he became respected among the other Faunus workers because he constantly protected them. He took blame for accidents to spare others punishment. He volunteered for the most dangerous labor. He became the kind of person who would destroy himself before letting someone weaker suffer in his place. Even before joining the White Fang, Adam genuinely wanted to protect people.

The branding incident becomes the moment that permanently changes him. After a Dust vein detonates during a mining operation, Adam accepts responsibility to shield the other Faunus workers from punishment. The SDC responds by branding him across the face. Not disciplining him.

Branding him. Reducing him to property. That moment destroys something inside Adam. Because the pain itself mattered less than what it represented: proof that no amount of obedience, sacrifice, or restraint would ever make people see Faunus as human. And from that point onward, Adam stops believing kindness alone can change the world.

When Blake enters the White Fang, Adam is not yet the monster people later remember. He is passionate. Intense. Hot-tempered, but compassionate toward his own people. During protests he protects civilians and injured Faunus alike. He believes violence should only be used when absolutely necessary. To many younger members of the White Fang, Adam is inspiring because he is living proof that fear can be survived.

That is why Blake falls in love with him.

Because Adam is everything Blake wishes she could be:
Fearless. Certain. Unbreakable.

And Adam loves Blake because she reminds him of the humanity he is slowly losing.

Their relationship genuinely works at first. Blake tempers Adam’s anger while Adam teaches Blake how to stand her ground. He trains her not because he wants her to fight wars, but because he never wants her to feel helpless. He gifts her books, encourages her intelligence, and teaches her discipline through combat. Adam sees Blake as proof that strength and compassion can coexist.

For a while, she keeps him balanced.

But the world keeps giving Adam reasons to hate it. The more brutality he witnesses against Faunus, the more his worldview changes. Peaceful protests fail. Innocent Faunus get beaten or killed. Human authorities protect powerful abusers while punishing desperate victims. And every time Adam tries restraint, suffering continues anyway. Meanwhile Blake continues believing people can still change.

That difference slowly tears them apart.

The turning point comes when one of Adam’s closest friends is murdered by a corrupt Atlesian higher-up who uses wealth and political power to avoid consequences entirely. 

For Adam, this becomes undeniable proof that justice does not exist for people like them. So Adam creates his own justice. He hunts the man down and publicly executes him before both Atlas and the White Fang.

And the crowd cheers.

That moment changes everything.

Blake stares in horror as Adam no longer looks like someone protecting people from fear but someone who has learned to control people through it.

The admiration, the worship, the power — Adam embraces all of it. For the first time in his life, the world is afraid of him instead of the other way around. And after spending his entire childhood powerless, Adam becomes addicted to that feeling.

“Fear is power. Pain is power.”

That philosophy becomes the foundation of who he is. To Adam, fear is no longer merely survival. It is truth.

What’s worse? part of him is still trying to protect people. Adam genuinely believes the world forced him into becoming what he became. In his mind, violence is the only language oppression has ever respected. Every monstrous act he commits is justified by the belief that mercy only creates more victims.

That is why Blake cannot entirely hate him. Because she knows the world truly did brutalize him. But Adam’s greatest flaw is that he stops seeing fear as a weapon and begins seeing it as identity. The more power he gains, the more he defines strength through domination, until eventually he values victory more than the people he once wanted to save.

His final argument with Blake mirrors the collapse of everything they once believed together. Adam argues that the world will never change unless forced to, but Blake argues that becoming monsters guarantees the world never will.

And when Blake finally leaves him, it devastates Adam far more than he admits. Because beneath all his rage, Adam genuinely trusted Blake more than anyone else. At one point he even asked her to stop him if he ever strayed too far from their cause.

Deep down, part of him knew what he was becoming.

But by the time Blake leaves, Adam no longer believes he can turn back.

That is what makes Adam tragic in this rewrite. Not that he was secretly evil. Not that he was always abusive.

But that he began as someone who wanted to protect suffering people. and slowly convinced himself that becoming terrifying was the only way to do it.

And the worst part is; part of him is right. The world did create Adam Taurus. The hatred, the abuse, the branding, the exploitation — all of it was real.

But Adam ultimately becomes proof that suffering alone does not justify cruelty. Because once fear stopped being a means of survival and became the core of his identity, Adam stopped fighting for freedom, and started fighting so nobody could ever make him feel powerless again.

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Day 6: How Would YOOUUU?! Yes YOU! Upgrade High Voltage?

be it’s mechanics

utility

versatility

writing

etc.

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 2 days ago
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Day 5: How Would YOOUUUU!? Yes YOU 🫵 Upgrade Aura Amp?

be it’s mechanics

power

utility

evolution

writing

etc.

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 3 days ago
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Day 4: How Would YOU! Yes YOU Upgrade Burn?

be it’s mechanics

its utility

raw power

writing wise

all power to you

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 4 days ago
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Day 3: How would YOU?! Yes You. Upgrade Shadow?

utility

mechanically

power wise

writing wise

all Power to you

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 5 days ago
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Day 2: how would YOU? Yes you, Upgrade Glyphs?

mechanics, Utility, Power, etc.

What are some upgrades you would give to Weiss’s Semblance?

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 7 days ago
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So a while ago I Did a series of Posts that Covered how one would upgrade RWBY weapons. I wanna do that again but different. So for the first one. How would YOU? Yes you. Upgrade Petal Burst?

whether it be its mechanics, its utility, its Power, etc. how would you upgrade Ruby’s Iconic Semblance?

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 8 days ago

What’s the morality of Being Forced to Cannibalize?

whether Coerced, Tricked or Starving Where do we gauge this Act in your honest opinions?

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 15 days ago

Soooo...RWBY Weapons.

let's be honest the weapons are one of the Main reasons you guys watch the show. hell it's probably the ONLY reason some watch the show. and it’s easy to see why With the RWBY Trailers Having the Weapons of the four main girls be one of the focal points

but it had me thinking...what would you do differently when it comes to weapons and tools of rwby? how would you handle them better?

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 18 days ago

In your Opinion Who out of these 3 danganronpa Antagonists is better written?

when it comes to their motivations, how they interact with the MCs, their Presence, how entertaining they are, how they drive or block the story. Who out of these three do you see as the best?

give your unbiased (or biased) opinions.

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 22 days ago

[Funny Trope] Everyone Scream!!

cloudy with a chance of meatballs

flint, Sam, Brent, Earl, Manny

rayman Origins

rayman, Globox, Teensies, bubble dreamer, skull guy, And dark toons.

just that one moment in a piece of media where everyone unanimously (or non unanimously) screams

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 24 days ago
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Would yall have preferred if Faunus Were More beastly or Nah?

like more features, more variety, maybe there’s levels to this shit. what do you all think?

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 26 days ago

Hot take: “I would just Write X out of the story” or “X Shouldn’t exist” is the Laziest Route and I Know most of you know that

I know this already a talked about comment, but getting rid of certain RWBY Story elements simply because one doesn’t like them or because they don’t fit ”their Version” of how they view the story is Lame. and in the end just makes more work for them in the long run because now they have to redefine or explain other elements to fill the gaps or spend more time inventing new lore to fill the holes than they would have spent just fixing what was already there, and at that Point it Isn’t Even RWBY anymore!

for me when it comes to these kinds of things it all boils down to Re-contextualization

tighten the mechanics, Introduce certain elements so they don’t feel random, have an Impact!

Fixing a flawed mechanic or character requires actual creativity, whereas deleting them just avoids the challenge.

what is Writing without a little challenge?

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u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 1 month ago
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Demon Bull King Adam [OC]

finally got around to Finishing The Adam Art. what do you all think?

u/RevolutionaryWave862 — 1 month ago