u/Rockpegw

I'm looking for just general criticism like how it reads or how the story is conveyed from this snippit.

Context- Tora is the general of this kingdom's military, the woman who enters is named Annabeth who is the former general. Annabeth had sacrificed her other daughter and Tora's sister to some demons in exchange for temporary safety, enough to get somewhere safe, though this was the anvil that broke the camel's back between the two. Annabeth had a habit of using fake names to infiltrate the castle to talk to Tora. Annabeth was supposed to be executed for giving her daughter away, but was consistently let go by her former soldiers because of their former loyalty. Annabeth's execution was mostly pushed for by Tora.

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