I find it interesting that this song is the first popular one according to Spotify, since I haven’t heard much discourse about it on here or anywhere else. I think it’s a pretty solid song, what do you think?
i don’t mean weird lyrics, but weird instrumentation. the weirder the better, don’t worry if it’s too weird I’ll probably like it.
it’s been a bit now and they’ve established the bank, Egg, I also think joe’s skeleton shed would be a funny flair. DO3‘s claw marks would be a cool flair too.
thought it was pretty neat so I bought it
Maybe the Rustling
Maybe the rustling of reeds
Brushing up against each other’s person
Down by the river,
Are the footsteps of souls;
Lost ghouls trying to find their way
To the Jordan.
I.
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1u8t1jw/comment/osb6vmd/?context=3
II.
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1u8u4gu/comment/osb6ax8/?context=3
very new to the genre, I know of Wardruna as well, and listened to them before, but nothings really stood out so I’d like to hear some more personal recs.
I wrote and finished a book a few years back, then rewrote it with the attempt to make it publisher worthy. it was not, as it was one of the first books I’d ever written and had several genuine problems— one of them being the worldbuilding was shallow and lackluster.
I wanted to change that, so I jotted down good ideas in a notebook to see what stuck; and I eventually found some good ones that worked together and fit the overall feel of the story. so I started a 3rd draft with the intention of implementing it into the story.
That 3rd draft has now taken me over two years, and I’m only a little over halfway. I genuinely love the story more than ever before I think it is higher quality overall, but the process has been extremely grueling for me, and it’s hard to focus.
What I’m asking here is do you know of any ways I could make rewriting a new draft of an old book more enjoyable? I‘ve always been a pantser and have thought about plotting for this book, but I was worried I’d change the feel of it and that’s something I don’t want to do to a book over halfway finished.