GRRM does a lot of standard lore dumps (“telling”) that aren’t integrated into dialogue or “showing” of any kind - is it just passable if you’re good enough?

It’s the number one criticism you see levelled at people posting here, that they are telling rather than showing.

I know it’s in good spirit most of the time, but it seems quite a misunderstood convention to me at this point.

Tons of the best writers ever including fantasy writers are switching into telling mode CONSTANTLY, and yet it seems many of the posts here it’s picked up on as a cardinal sin of writing and called out to the high heaven.

I’m not saying that it’s not an obvious beginners mistake to over tell - but a lot of the culture here seems to be calling out telling as a device in general, even when it’s integrated alongside plenty of showing.

Is this due to people not producing content that justifies the switch in perspective, or is that a bunch of people here genuinely don’t realise that telling is an important tool to switch up flow and momentum ?

If it’s indeed the later I think that is being poorly communicated at times.

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u/Ticket-Tight — 4 days ago

I suspect I am one of the only people who think this, but Jake Spoon is my favourite character. Anyone else?

To me there’s something just so realistic about him, his flaw is that he’s lazy, unprincipled and a cad bastard with women.

Its hardly chief villain territory, and he’s anything but a hero.

Yet in his lifetime he was considered one and died as the other despite never really qualifying fully as either.

Mainly because he’s too lazy to assert himself as anything concrete and so can get swept up in anything - he becomes a famous ranger because he’s in the right place at the right time and pulls off a famous killing shot, more or less by luck, it’s implied.

He then joins up with Dan Scruggs and his murderous outlaws again not because he’s overtly that “evil” , but because he’s unprincipled, lazy and it’s the most convenient thing to do at the time - and this is ultimately what gets him killed and he dies a villain’s death.

Its a very unique character archetype and a very realistic one in my opinion, I’m always drawn to unique characters and to me it’s interesting how a man without principles can find himself perceived as both a hero or a villain in his lifetime with a bit of good / bad luck depending on where he was at the moment.

u/Ticket-Tight — 6 days ago

Not played in a while, has RP returned to horde since there’s a new silver moon?

I remember silvermoon was the hub of horde RP back in the day, one one day it just died out.

I was wondering if it might come back now that there’s been a revamp.

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u/Ticket-Tight — 1 month ago

Quite challenging writing a chapter that takes place almost entirely in a place where the character can’t see. Did it work for you?

u/Ticket-Tight — 2 months ago

Quite challenging writing a chapter that takes place almost entirely in a place where the character can’t see. Did it work for you? [Dark Fantasy - 1900 words]

u/Ticket-Tight — 2 months ago
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Did Cersei get insanely lucky that Robert got killed by a boar just by her getting him drunk?

It seems like a master stroke by her at that moment where she absolutely needed him to die before she got exposed by Ned, but merely getting him drunk and hoping a boat kills him seems like a bit too much of a coincidence for me given GRRM (as all writers of his calibre do) very rarely uses coincidence to drive the plot.

Am I missing something here?

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u/Ticket-Tight — 2 months ago

Does this lore about my world’s afterlife feel like it’s devil weed naturalistically through the dialogue ? [Dark Celtic Fantasy - 3000 words]

u/Ticket-Tight — 2 months ago

Does the symbolism around the bird in this chapter come across too on the nose? (Villain pov)

u/Ticket-Tight — 2 months ago

Does anyone else much prefer writing villain POVs? I really enjoyed this one, does the story interest you? [Grimdark - 2000 words]

u/Ticket-Tight — 3 months ago

Is the tension / inner conflict strong enough in this scene to justify the heavy lore drop?

u/Ticket-Tight — 3 months ago

Is the tension / inner conflict in this chapter strong enough to justify the lore drop? The Patient Darkness [Grimdark - 2000 words]

u/Ticket-Tight — 3 months ago
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George Lucas taught me one thing; world building will ultimately connect with people more than script writing

Star Wars is a unique franchise in that it has some of the greatest world building (btw this isn’t all down to to him, external factors are included in this - including music - in which the prequels are involved) .

I just watched the prequels for the first time since I was a child.

I was surprised by how much I enjoyed them.

The script is abhorrent , I don’t even blame the actors for anything that came across on screen.

But, I genuinely think with a skilled dialogue writer it could’ve been totally made to pass: every beat I. The story included.

It a shame, I will not deny how bad the dialogue is, but I enjoyed every moment.

These could’ve been incredible movies with a bit of delegation from George…

And that’s all down to the world building.

I compare it to the matrix, and it came out in the same era.

The imagination from the creator was unbelievable, but it’s one of the few cases where the studio could’ve stepped in and constraints on one aspect (dialogue in this case) would’ve elevated the end product exponentially.

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u/Ticket-Tight — 3 months ago

Should I not have orange juice if I’ve had a couple days of eating seed oil slop?

Sugar is still bad when we’re seed oiled up right?

What’s the consensus on this?

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u/Ticket-Tight — 3 months ago