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I want to share a piece of poetry and find out if I have the potential to write songs or poems in the style of a personal diary. English is not my native language, by the way, so I accept criticism on grammatical errors.
your every falling in love feels like a glimmer of my hope
that you finally step over
and maybe finally u stop
somebody maybe had said to you
that i am a bad friend
but they don't get trash in their ears
like i patient do that
when my phone just buzzed up
i laid and scrolled my phone
but i lied to you over and over that I'm tired or not alone
P.S maybe i really bad friend, but i need to spill my guts, lol
u/Turbulent_Piece_4089 — 12 hours ago