u/Winter-Case-1293

I did make one before this one but it was too crude to be called a SaaS animation but this time though I worked hard on storyboarding, voice over and sfx. I used heavy sfx initially but decided to tone it down. I'd like feedback on what could be improved.

All these photos are taken from vivo X100 pro.

And for location:- Mustang, pepsicola, Jiri

So I'm a motion designer and I was thinking of applying for jobs but every job has minimum requirements of 2+ years. I've only done a 3 month internship and I'm not confident that they'll even accept my CV with 3 month experience. I've attached my showreel too so I'd like to hear some opinion on my situation.