I’ve been trying a few things, any ideas?

I’ve been trying a few things, any ideas?

https://soundcloud.com/black-napas/maximq22q-1

I’m working on a trip-hop album with a cyberpunk concept, and I’ve been experimenting with different elements. The other tracks have turned out pretty well, but I feel a bit stuck on this one.

For now, I’m thinking of adding a few more drum samples and playing around with the dynamics, but I can’t really think of what other instruments or sounds I should layer on top.

I’m especially stuck on the progression/arrangement. There’s a section in the middle where I basically just filled the space with noise because I couldn’t think of how to develop the track from there. It kind of feels like a placeholder right now.

u/Witty_Engineering509 — 7 days ago

Still working

(*I used a translator because I'm not good at English to write very long sentences. idk why reason that i can read but i can't write.)

Progress has been slow since I've mostly been working on it after my day job, but I think it's about 30% done now.

I also picked up a new mic to replace my phone's microphone, and the SM58 has actually been great for recording at home.

After finishing the two newest tracks (Demo 4 and Demo 5), I feel like the album finally has a clear direction. It might end up sounding more like psychedelic dream pop than hip-hop, though. I think a trip-hop style rap vocal would fit it really well, but I keep slipping into this slow, drawn-out delivery. I also have to write lyrics (for now, I've just been mumbling made-up lyrics or using Massive Attack's lyrics), but it's such a boring. Anyway, I'm pretty happy with how it's coming along.

https://soundcloud.com/black-napas/sets/hypervigilance

u/Witty_Engineering509 — 1 month ago