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Tempest of Stars; [Romantasy, 3, 312 words]
hi!
I have finished a draft of my novel and have done a round of self editing. I definitely have more editing to do however I want to step away from it for a bit before going back so I have a fresh perspective. During this time I’d love to get some initial feedback on how it reads, if it captures attention, any concerns with writing style, etc.
I plan on looking for beta readers to read it all for feedback on plot holes, character development, where the story may fall flat and the like.
For context: this is a Romantasy that follows a group on a quest for a magical object, however they are all on the journey for different, conflicting reasons. They don’t know this and it inevitably leads to betrayals you didn’t see coming.
Anything helps :)