u/jpokemon6

this sentence in my book runs on for a little while, how can i shorten it? i do want to keep the descriptions, i just need to break them up into multiple sentences.

"I walked over to the gas station from the pump, and as I opened the door to the gas station, I saw Ari, her intricately braided dark brown hair— contrasting her hazelnut skin tone—loosely in a bun, wearing a black leather jacket with a grey t-shirt underneath, dark grey jeans, and a red heart necklace, next to Zoey, her dark brown hair tightly in a bun, matching Ari, wearing just a green “Mineblock” t-shirt, baggy dark green sweatpants, and the same red heart necklace as Ari, and Wren, their braided dark brown hair tightly in a bun, but—differentiating from Ari and Zoey—with a few thick  strands of their braided hair falling down their face, wearing a black leather jacket similar to Ari’s, but with a lightish green graphic tee of a band I didn’t recognize, very baggy dark grey jeans, and the same red heart necklace as Ari and Zoey, most likely a sort of friendship bracelet, deciding what snacks to get."

also if you know a better sub to post this in please tell me <3

i have this old file that used to be a minecraft modpack, that doesnt technically exist, but it says it does. when i attempt to delete/modify it, windows says that it cant be found in that location. the name of the file is "with mai brother", with no file extension. (0 kb)

me and my family are interested in adopting a rabbit, but we're not sure what we need to buy in order for the rabbit to be happy, cage, feed, etc. also some general rabbit advice would be great, thanks in advance!