u/linefl0

Part 2: https://ibb.co/album/B2DcnR?sort=date_asc

Hello! I'd love to receive feedback on the first story chapter of my comedy series. It's 49 pages long and I realize that making a critique for something relatively long is difficult but I'd appreciate any meaningful feedback or comment

I'm mainly concerned about whether the situations make sense, the characters are consistent and the comedy hits its notes, but you're obviously free to speak about any aspect you'd like

This chapter comes after a few introductory strips but there isn't much context needed to read it other than that the raccoon and the frog are longtime friends and that the rat just went through a breakup

Thanks! (This is a follow-up to a post from a little while back)

These are some of my character designs for a dark-ish dungeon crawler concept, I'm curious to know if they look interesting/intriguing to you or if you have any critique that'll help make them more fully realized 🙏